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    Default Memini Mortem

    I've never felt the keen sting of death
    As briskly as when I am lost in thought,
    In the darkest corners of my experience
    Where concepts and feelings are bought

    I wander in an almost conscious world
    In a state of inhumanly cryptic disrepair,
    As the fear of the unknown weighs down
    My being longs for a breath of living air

    Myself, the single mortal mind unhinged
    Reverts away from common rationalities,
    As the fibers of my cognition unfurl-
    This primal basket of my carnal tenacities

    Repulsed by the revision of a life left alone,
    To dwell in the light of others who condone-
    The deepest revelations of the individual
    To say the least their warmth was residual

    But neither the poet or the philosopher
    Through shining sword or swollen pen-
    Can refine these terrifying questions,
    Which almost tear my soul to shreds

    At the end of the labyrinth between dark and light
    Lays a beast of the mind and the heart at war,
    I am the wandering specter that approaches weary
    Of the time I have spent; to be experienced nevermore


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: Memini Mortem

    Profound, but more importantly, intriguing. I love the poetic style of rhyme you employ, which is not unlike my own, although I must say my muse has been comatose for quite some time now. But perhaps after reading this piece of poetry I can resuscitate the dead poets heart in me. I also loved and can relate to how each stanza gives off more and more of a distant and cynical impression; and the contrasting insecurites and weaknesses really only compound the magic I feel that makes this poem really great.

    Overall? I loved the whole damn thing. I hope to see you write more. ^^

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