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    Default Subaru Nakajima Wallaper

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    Made two versions of this wallpaper. It has been awhile since I made one.
    Last edited by Rainbow Crash; 07-13-2013 at 06:39 AM. Reason: Removed the original version for content

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    Default Re: Subaru Nakajima Wallaper

    hm.

    It has the potential to be a wallpaper. You have it all kind of neatly balanced out so icons can act on one side to compliment the character on the right. Constant color assembly work, blues+whites.

    Okay, some things, text needs to go. Stop using text, never use it again. You seem to trying to fill in missing space or lost detail with the text and the bars, they are highly distracting. It also kind of breaks the balance that is already good by making both sides involved. Apart from that, I dont really dig the ecchi version of this, I dont use wallpapers of this nature, and I dont know anyone who does, so I would use the alternative variant of that image.

    If you want more detail, go in with more C4Ds and just make them smaller, they'll fill in as detail very nicely. You should also consider doing little thumbnail signatures to provice proof of concet before embarking on a wall. If it doesnt look good small, it wont look good big, and all that crap. Just practice more, and something will happen.

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    Default Re: Subaru Nakajima Wallaper

    mmk, the bad...
    like @Serated said



    it needs more zazz. It looks like it has a lot of potential, but it also feels kinda unfinished. Personally, i dont think that writing is a bad thing, i just think it works out better as part of the background. it needs to go along smoothly so that the viewer doesn't notice it right away. if the first thing they notice after the naked girl is the word "subaru"...and they drive a mitsubishi... they will instantly lose interest.

    now, the good!
    while i think that there needs to be a bit more stuff going on in the BG, its good that you went with too little, rather than too much. The colors are spot on. how you managed to make skin color look that good against a blue bg is beyond me. and your choice in C4D's is also good. you just need a lil more of them! lol

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