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    Please help me out.. I feel that something is missing..
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    dirty thoughts are bad nice wp - i don't really know what to add, play around with the text, add a sun ray or smth like that, or sparkles - play around with it to add some 'summerish details'/etc.... some grass, perhaps? just try to keep everything vector-ish and not too overcrowded...
    oh well, keep in mind that it's just my very weird opinion. keep it up


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    well, in my opinion the colors seem a bit bland, is there any way you can brighten them up a bit?

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    it looks a little plain.....brighten up the colors and add some grass or sparkles.....

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    Looks lovely to me. I actually find the bland colours work well with the characters' colours. If you brighten it up it might be a bit eye strained lol don't know.

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    o0oo! i agree with the sun rays!... that would look preety :^_^:
    Also... the outlines of the cracters are kinda funky... like some spots of the outlines are missing... you might want to fux them
    but it its looking good!

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    The outlines are supposed to be like that..

    I'll fix the rays as soon as I come home again.. I'll be gone for about a week..
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    I'm all for simplicity, and I really like it just the way it is.

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    I vote for leaving well enough alone. If you brighten it, it would make the characters look bland in comparison. No, I say that everything meshes well as is. ^_^
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    Get rid of the outline in the grass.
    That would fix the background.

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    Originally posted by Enry@Jul 11 2004, 04:23 AM
    Get rid of the outline in the grass.
    That would fix the background.
    Outline in the grass? Huh?
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    The black line on the right between grass and sky - get rid of that line (or make it less dark), it might help the background.

    Also, I like the simple outstretched hand with the butterfly, but adding the word 'Marohomatic' atop it makes that part of the image a little too heavy. Maybe make the word a bit smaller, move it away from the butterfly so nothing's competing with the butterfly for attention?

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    I'm back..

    Thanks for the comments and the ideas..
    I'll I'll fix the stuff as soon as possible.. ^^;
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    -Bump-
    I need a new computer.. -.-
    After 5 minutes with PhotoShop, my comp reboots itself.. ;___;

    Anyway.. here's the next v.
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    the last one is way better ^^


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    I like the sun rays..looks purty. Good job with the last one.

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    :^_^: Nice leave as it is
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    Something I didn't notice.. Quality loss deluxe! o.o; I'll have to work with that...
    <.<;

    Anyway.. Thanks for the help&#33; ^^
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    Did you make this? Or leech it? The reason I ask is because I found this:

    http://isoldmysoultonumbus.5chan.net/mm011...c__5f043504.png
    I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.

    Now this, this I fly with pride.

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    lol as usual.. try adding more pink

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