Child

[sunee]

I felt you deep inside me,
A child forged in sin.
And though I'll love you madly,
I could not let you live.

I'm sorry that I killed you,
The truth I'll never show.
The evil act - I had to.
I'll never see you grow.

I would have loved to keep you,
But my life is still to live.
The choice of what to do,
So I sent you up to him.

Someday I hope to meet you,
To see your shinning face.
If only God forgives me,
And let's me past his gate.


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Pretty self explainatory. Religious sounding, I know.

[IluvAllison]

Very well done. It flows well, the words and sentences go well with each other. It feels as if it is written in a rythm, sort of like a lyric. Maybe thats how some poems are supposed to work. Im not religious but I still enjoyed, although not on a personal level, I just liked it is all ;>

[Kleio]

That was really beautiful. I really can't think of any words to describe it, but just wow. Really good.