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    Red face New here...Critique my art?

    as the title says, i'm new here. hiya! i just discovered this site and thought it would be better for feedback than other sites i've been on. any sort of feedback or critique would be awesome ^^ the more you can tell me how to improve, the better.

    http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/...psf8914838.jpg

    http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/...ps5f43a6a8.jpg
    thanks!

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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    Really nice. I like the first one better because of the shading stuff and dots art.
    The second one could be improve....maybe I find the colours a bit i dont know but there is something missing. Anyways continue the good work!
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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    Wow these are good. The first one could pass for pro manga. I agree with XYangchenX that the second one could be improved through. I dunno, I guess I'm looking for a little bit more three dimensionality. But overall, it's good. You'lll go a long way i think.

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    You do know you can get tips from Deviantart right? I've been trying to learn how to improve my own drawings. I use Google or My Search Results to look for more specific tips like adding texture and stuff. Maybe next time I'll post my work here.

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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    I love the first one! Second one is very good, but I feel like the eyes are a little 'lifeless' like maybe a bit dark... but you're way more talented than me so nice work!!

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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    The first one has to be the best one but the second one could use a little more work and then it would be awesome. :3

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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    thanks all! this is great feedback ^^

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    Wow, these are really good. I really like the first one but I prefer the second. I'm more attracted to the colour.


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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    Love the first one, it's so epic <3 The second one is very cool but could do with a little more work to make it perfect. Perhaps adding some kind of shading effect from the leaves above her. Also I'm wondering if it would help if she had pupils or something, something to make the viewer connect to her more.
    Your work is amazing, keep it up. =]
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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    I like the first one! But I like the concept of the second one, needs a little bit of work though just a little ^^. But being able to make those is just incredible. *Two thumbs Up*
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    Default Re: New here...Critique my art?

    you are an amazing animation artist! Nice artworks. I think you're much better with the first type of drawings which is black and white but I also love how you choose colors in the second one. Just great! play pokies
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