At the beginning (or around there) is "omoide no tsumatta kurabireta nuno to"; it should be "omoide no tsumatta kutabireta nuno to"
After a few more lines, there's "tsugihagi awasete naoshite yo!"; it should read "tsugihagi awase de naoshite yo!"
Somewhere around two thirds through is "tte oningyousan iu no." It should be "tte oningyousan ga iu no."
A line near the end reads "mahou no sekai wo watashi no sekai wa konna ni mo chigauno."; It should read "mahou no sekai to watashi no sekai wa konna ni mo chigauno."
Another line after it reads "hitokake no haha no sara ni nori"; It should be "hitokake no haha ga sara ni nori"
... I suck at this.