I want to punch something
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I want to punch something
ein, zwei, drei, vier bin endlich weg von Dir
fünf, sechs, sieben, acht Du hast jetzt keine Macht
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Looks good to me! I really like the colors and positioning <3
I kinda feel like she's a bit...too sharp? Also, the black thing at the bottom looks a little out of place.
Love the colour scheme and the shapes in the background, but it feels quite empty on the left, particularly in the top left corner. Maybe if you add some more yellow/green light effects in this area, blending into the image on the right, it will balance the image more.
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Good, would use help from more subtle color variety to make it more explosive. Although, I do feel this particular tag has all your usually qualities stuck to it. Lighting is present, the render is very off to the side to balance your flow. I think, you need a little exploration in your future. Like an wide tag with little height, or more height with less width. Have you also considered NOT using lighting as a element in one of your tags? Little stuff like that might open up new avenues to you, but the tag works very nicely by itself.
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