Correction to Shynny Boy (Ever17 Vocal Collection)

[kenneth_ooi_kenneth]

Link to song: http://www.animelyrics.com/game/ever17/shynnyboy.htm

I was just translating the lyrics for the song, and based on the booklet that came with the CD, the correct lyrics should be as follows in the picture:



Hence, there are missing lines in both the kanji, as well as romaji lyrics at the end of the song, so the following lines should be added to the end of the current version of the lyrics:

(In kanji)

Make it up Shynny boy
その腕で扉開けて
Make me up Shynny boy
いつだってそばにいるよ
Make it up Shynny boy
その腕で扉開けて
Going up Lonley boy
風が待つ　大地へと　駆け出そう
Make it up Shynny boy

(In romaji)

Make it up Shynny boy
Sono ude de tobira akete
Make me up Shynny boy
Itsudatte soba ni iru yo
Make it up Shynny boy
Sono ude de tobira akete
Going up Lonley boy
Kaze ga matsu daichi e to kakedasou
Make it up Shynny boy

In other words, I propose that the romaji lyrics on the lyric page be changed to...

Yowaki na boukensha ni genki wo ageru wa
Chiisaku hanikandeta ne kizuita yo

Soredemo ureshii no wa mukuchi na egao ga
Sukoshizutsu fuetekita kara

KIMI wa shiranai keredo kitto sono kokoro ni wa
Yuuki ga ippai tsumatteru saa tashikameyou

Make it up Shynny boy
Sono ude de tobira akete

Going up Lonley boy
Kaze ga matsu daichi e to kakedasou

Kodoku na toubousha to yubi wo tsunaideru
Dare demo sabishii toki wa aru mono yo

Sarige ni dekinai no wa massugu na kimochi
Demo WATASHI choppiri shynny girl

KIMI wa kizukanai kedo itsumo KIMI no mawari de
Ai ga ippai sodatteru hora takanaru mune

Make me up Shynny boy
Itsudatte soba ni iru yo

Hurry up Lovely boy
Tsunagu te wo hanasazu ni hohoende

Make it up Shynny boy
Sono ude de tobira akete

Make me up Shynny boy
Itsudatte soba ni iru yo

Make it up Shynny boy
Sono ude de tobira akete

Going up Lonley boy
Kaze ga matsu daichi e to kakedasou

Make it up Shynny boy

...And the kanji lyrics to be changed to...

弱気な冒険者に　元気をあげるわ
小さくはにかんでたね　気づいたよ

それでも嬉しいのは　無口な笑顔が
少しづつ　増えてきたから

キミは知らないけれど　きっとその心には
勇気がいっぱい詰まってる　さあ　確かめよう

Make it up Shynny boy
その腕で扉開けて

Going up Lonley boy
風が待つ　大地へと　駆け出そう

孤独な逃亡者と　指を繋いでる
誰でも淋しい時は　あるものよ

さり気にできないのは　まっすぐな気持ち
でもワタシ 　ちょっぴりshynny girl

キミは気づかないけど　いつもキミのまわりで
愛がいっぱい育ってる　ほら　高鳴る胸

Make me up Shynny boy
いつだってそばにいるよ

Hurry up Lovely boy
繋ぐ手を　離さずに　微笑んで

Make it up Shynny boy
その腕で扉開けて

Make me up Shynny boy
いつだってそばにいるよ

Make it up Shynny boy
その腕で扉開けて

Going up Lonley boy
風が待つ　大地へと　駆け出そう

Make it up Shynny boy

...And here's my translation of the lyrics (if that's needed, seeing as the lyrics haven't been translated on the page itself yet):

Hey, you fainthearted adventurer, I’ll give you courage!
You were a little bit shy, right? I noticed it.

Even then, I’m happy because your silent smiles
Have slowly become more frequent.

You might not know it, but surely that heart of yours
Is full of courage. So, let’s make sure of that!

Make it up, shiny boy
Open the doors with that arm of yours!

Going up, lonely boy,
The wind is waiting; let’s dash off into the vast land!

To a lonely escapee’s fingers my own are joined.
Hey, everyone has times when they feel lonely.

What I can’t help but be concerned about is your honest feelings,
But I’m just a little shiny girl.

You might not have noticed, but always around you,
There’s lots of love in the air. Look, your heartbeat’s speeding up!

Make me up, shiny boy,
I’ll always be by your side.

Hurry up, lovely boy,
Keep on holding my hand and smile!

Make it up, shiny boy,
Open the doors with that arm of yours!

Make me up, shiny boy,
I’ll always be by your side

Make it up, shiny boy,
Open the doors with that arm of yours!

Going up, lonely boy,
The wind is waiting; let’s dash off into the vast land!

Make it up, shiny boy!

Oh, and I'm not sure if I should post it here, but "squall rise above" should also be classified under the Ever17 Vocal Collection album on this page (it's not currently classified under any album yet): http://www.animelyrics.com/game/ever17/

Thanks for reading through this long post!