Remastered Wall (Need Advice)

[Light Buster]

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...er-d5nj84i.jpg

As the name suggest, I went back to one of my old wallpapers and decide to buff it up but I'm lost now trying to figure out what to do next. Anyone can help me here?

[Kaleohano]

i'd make the writing blend in more. Some gradient maps probably wouldn't hurt either. I'd also go with a darker background. Something that works a little better with the C4D. oh, and her butt needs to be bigger. Much Much Bigger.

[Light Buster]

Oh, and her butt needs to be bigger. Much Much Bigger.

LOL, I see you have a thing for women huh? I'll see what I can do for you but I can't promise you anything since I am in college right now and my time is critical.

[Serated]

Well, you need a concept, I think. You have just a big array of C4Ds, text, light, etc, but none of those elements is really combining with one another. They all really stand apart, so its difficult to look at the wallpaper as 'believable.' Like, what are you going for here? Strong light? Good depth? Do you want a space scene, or an abstract C4D scape? That stuff is important, and you should decide on it, and go from there. Then I can help you better.

[Light Buster]

Well, you need a concept, I think. You have just a big array of C4Ds, text, light, etc, but none of those elements is really combining with one another. They all really stand apart, so its difficult to look at the wallpaper as 'believable.' Like, what are you going for here? Strong light? Good depth? Do you want a space scene, or an abstract C4D scape? That stuff is important, and you should decide on it, and go from there. Then I can help you better.

I was going for a little bit of each but the whole idea was scrapped and now I'm going for an abstract C4D scape though I have no idea where to start. On the bright side, I did update my wall a bit with some gradients and saturation changes.