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    There is frailty in your words,
    I was once foolish enough to believe them.
    I'm older now, and more the wiser.
    While I still love you, I trust you less.
    There really is no need to lie to me.

    Promises are the ways of cowards.
    In your hollow words it is us you condemn.
    For without trust there can be no love nor honor.
    Weighed down with your lies, under duress,
    And I'm longing to be free.

    One day soon, I'll shed this thin cloak
    Sewn together from broken promises.
    I'll leave you behind with your false hope.
    The loving embrace of cold truth
    Waits to chill my mortal body.

    As my final act it's Death I invoke
    For Life's lies are bottomless
    And Death with it's truth I elope.
    You took my soulmate in her youth
    Now I'll join her with no regrets, here lies Beauty.


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    Default Re: Promises

    Ahh, so many feels ;_; <33

    Awesome signature created by the very talented Holocast <3

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    Default Re: Promises

    Very nice.
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    Default Re: Promises

    Thank you! ��


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    Default Re: Promises

    Very beautifully written.

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    Default Re: Promises

    Rhyme scheme is super cool. Dunno what the metre is tho, but maybe I'm just dumb.

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    Default Re: Promises

    I free verse like everything. I don't like using specific schemes or anything. I can, but only for like an assignment or whatever.


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