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    Default [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Can someone help translate this song into English?
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    Or maybe it is easier to clean up the English lyrics I found on this blog?
    The English lyrics almost feels google translated some places, I'm struggling to make sense of it some places.

    It has Kanji (or whatever) subs already on it, and I want to add the Romaji and English lyrics to the video. I have a little hobby of playing with aegisub when bored, and all I need is good English lyrics to finish this

    Thanks in advance

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    I'll see what I can do with it. (:


    「そんな顔をしないで。また会えるよ、シンジ君」
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    I'm sorry (not) sorry.

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Quote Originally Posted by Lolita. View Post
    I'll see what I can do with it. (:
    じゃあ、任せておきますね^^

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Thanks Lolita. See what you can do.
    It's no big hurry, as long as I can get it in good time before Christmas I'm happy.

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    @Glenn Teie Kvelland :

    Here's the translation! I just submitted it, I'll let you know when the full lyrics are up on site. ^^

    The cold winter has come around, a fun festival
    The last decoration of a year,
    Merry Christmas!
    The cheerful atmosphere of the town is different from usual
    Bells ring loudly on the morn of Christmas eve.

    The streets which have become lively and bustling,
    with people deliberating over presents
    The gift from the sky is white, shining snow
    The ground is dyed white
    It's a White Christmas

    Even the evergreen fir trees are dyed pure white
    Only once every year,
    it's a White Christmas
    Let's spend it together with the people most important to us

    It's become a cold winter, with enjoyable celebrations
    The last prayer of a year
    Merry Christmas!
    On a night where snow falls, many neon lights
    bestow the seven colors upon lit lamps
    Warm lights shine through
    Happy voices overflow
    Even the pure white fir trees are shining with the colors of the rainbow
    The stars sparkle in the night sky,
    it's a White Christmas

    The entire starry sky is a huge planetarium
    which children hang their wishes upon
    It's a White Christmas
    I wonder what I'll receive for this year's presents?

    The lights of the town at night have been extinguished, and children sleep...
    The hands of the clock roll around to midnight, and Santa Claus comes along
    Leading cute reindeers, the sleigh brings big dreams
    Under children's pillows, he places boxes of dreams.
    On the night of Christmas Eve when the snow falls ceaselessly, Santa Claus leaves
    The sound of bells grows fainter, and a shining morning sun will rise.

    The entire town is dyed white, it's a White Christmas
    Church bells which herald the morn ring
    Only once every year, it's a White Christmas
    Let's all enjoy this day magnificently


    「そんな顔をしないで。また会えるよ、シンジ君」
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    もう二度と会えないなんて信じられない
    まだ何も伝えてない
    まだ何も伝えてない


    I'm sorry (not) sorry.

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Thank you very much Lolita
    This looks many times better than what I found.

    The translation actually makes sense to me now
    I guess I have some work to do later and put this new translation into Aegisub.


    Don't know how many hours you have offered for this.
    But is there anything I can give you in return?

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Quote Originally Posted by Glenn Teie Kvelland View Post
    Thank you very much Lolita
    This looks many times better than what I found.

    The translation actually makes sense to me now
    I guess I have some work to do later and put this new translation into Aegisub.


    Don't know how many hours you have offered for this.
    But is there anything I can give you in return?
    Glad you like it! ^^ Nah, just seeing the video when it's done will be fine :3


    「そんな顔をしないで。また会えるよ、シンジ君」
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    もう二度と会えないなんて信じられない
    まだ何も伝えてない
    まだ何も伝えてない


    I'm sorry (not) sorry.

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Greetings from snowy southern Norway.

    I think I finally got the subtitles as good as they can be with my skills.




    A few lines should have been broken up to fit the original subs on the video. But as there was no comma on the English text there, I didn't take the chance on guessing.


    I took the liberty to change a few things in the translation.
    Changed "morn" to "morning" on the last line of first the verse, and second line last verse.
    Also changed in the last verse, last line "Let's all enjoy this day magnificently" to "Let's all enjoy this magnificent day" (sounded better that way, but not sure if that was correct)

    I also used your Romaji translation most of the time.

    But a few places confused me, so I used the old one a few places.

    Take a look at 2nd verse, 3rd line.
    Tenkuu kara no okurimono wa shiroku hikaru yuki
    Now open the video at 1:17 and listen to the song here.
    To me it sound more like Sora kara.... than Tenkuu kara....

    And also the second verse from bottom, line two.
    Tokei no hari ga reiji o mawaru to
    Is it supposed to be reiji or zero-ji ?
    If you listen to Gakupo (I think) around 3:41 in the video, it sound more like Tokei no hari ga zero-ji o mawaru to

    But what do I know, you're the expert

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Yeah, that's okay. I did use morn because I thought it sounded more christmassy, but I guess it's not easily grasped. xD

    Hmm, I still hear it as tenkuu, and mainly because the kanji is 天空 -> Tenkuu. 空 -> Sora. It's a little hard to hear because of the voice quality, but I'm quite confident of it. ^^;;

    Ah, yes! You're right about that. Sorry about it!


    「そんな顔をしないで。また会えるよ、シンジ君」
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    まだ何も伝えてない
    まだ何も伝えてない


    I'm sorry (not) sorry.

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Good morning, or whatever it is your part of the world now, Lolita.

    Hmm, well I don't know.
    I can't really say I'm sure it sound like Sora either. Don't know how Tenkuu would sound. But if I would say what it hears like, I would say it sounds like Sonna.
    It's a bit hard to hear, I agree on that.

    Anyway, thanks for the big help

    I wish you a Merry Christmas, and a happy New Year

    Now I'm going out to shovel snow.
    It's still dark outside, but I think we got a few centimeters tonight.
    We are having a White Christmas this year, there is no doubt about that

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    No problem, and Merry Christmas to you too! xD

    Unfortunately, no snow here...so I suppose it's a green Christmas :P


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    まだ何も伝えてない


    I'm sorry (not) sorry.

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    Default Re: [REQ] ホワイト☆クリスマス (White☆Christmas) - VOCALOID all Stars

    Sorry for butting into your conversion :P

    I think 天空 is probably pronounced sora in this case, because the melody only has room for 2 syllables, but tenkuu would require 4. I agree the sound quality is on the inferior side, so I'm only saying this with 75% certainty. orz

    But also, at the end of the first stanza, shouldn't takanaru be just naru? ^^;

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