I decided to start pixeling, mainly because I wanted to create a whole "dot box" series of the VOCALOIDs. I told @Alphabet I would do it when my computer was back up and I did, she thought I wasn't series about learning how (I really need the pixel forum you linked me to, by the way. T_T). Anyway, these are the dot boxes. I DID NOT MAKE THESE.
This is the one I'm currently working on, I really need some help on telling me what looks right and what doesn't. This took me 4 hours, please be honest (even if you have to be brutal), if you aren't honest I'll never improve. Remember, I'm trying to get it to resemble the ones above, if you think it's missing some "pizzazz" make sure to tell me, please! The original creators most recent work is IA, the girl with the cream hair and pink skirt.
This is the original for comparison. http://mayusan.jp/