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    Default Missing lines in Sword Art Online's Yume Sekai's transliteration (and translation)

    http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sao/saoyumesekai.htm

    Between the 4th and 5th stanzas, there should be another stanza that was omitted.

    Keeping with the formatting of the original, I've transliteration/translated those two lines:

    Osanai RIBON wo suteta yoru kara mita yume wa
    Kagayaita machi de risou no hibi wo okutteta

    Ever since the night that I threw away the childish ribbon, the dream that I saw was
    Me having spent ideal days in a town that sparkled.

    Also, while I'm at it, the last word of the 4th stanza in the transliteration (hibiiteiku) should be "hibiiteku" (the same mistake is repeated at the end of the 3rd to last stanza), and the last word of the 5th stanza from the bottom in the transliteration (tsuzukeru) should be "tsuzuketeru".
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    Default Re: Missing lines in Sword Art Online's Yume Sekai's transliteration (and translation

    @mewpudding101 what do you think of these corrections?

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    Default Re: Missing lines in Sword Art Online's Yume Sekai's transliteration (and translation

    I also noticed something else. In the first line of the translation, the first instance of "light" should be taken out.

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    Default Re: Missing lines in Sword Art Online's Yume Sekai's transliteration (and translation

    Hm, sorry for missing that part. Feel free to add it in.
    Hi. I'm mewpudding101 (Tokyo Mew Mew reference), or you can call me, Sarah, or Akiko. I live in Tokyo, and work as a translator for an anime company while going to school.

    I DON'T GET ON THE FORUMS THAT OFTEN. I'm VERY busy, so please do not expect me to take time to find threads that mention me. If you need to fix things on my lyrics, please PM me about it, and if I agree, just fix it. I'm doing my best to still pump out content in my busy life, so please understand my lack of contact. Thanks!

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