Jun's Signatures

[Jun_Hiroshi]

Well, this is my first signature attempt. I was hoping for some constructive feedback as to what I need to improve on. Thanks ahead of time.



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Also, the brushes I used were Super Buu's Chaos Abstract brushes. I used the Cloister Black(One from Deathnote) font as well.
Renders are from an anime called "Sword Art Online(SAO)".


UPDATE!
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Haven't been able to post some more of my signatures lately, but here are a few that I finished. They look terrible though.






One I made for my brother Shiza Maku(Note: I used the Darker Than Black background, due to lack of time):


Also, a non-signature GFX that I did(Still not finished however):