3rd Try at a WP

[Kaleohano]

Well, my sigs have improved a lot. Figured i'll see what @Serated has to say toward me doing another wallpaper.
Do you think i've improved?

 

Wrong season but whatever lol

http://i.imgur.com/cn8gU.jpg

[Rainbow Crash]

Pro tip: NEVER put anything over the face.... This includes snow.... That dot between her eyes is annoying and should be erased if you still have the .psd. Tone the snow back a bit.

Read this when you have time: http://www.animeforum.com/showthread...for-Wallpapers

You are on the right track none the less. You just have to do research, practice, more research and finally more practice so they aren't very bland.

[Kaleohano]

Pro tip: NEVER put anything over the face.... This includes snow.... That dot between her eyes is annoying and should be erased if you still have the .psd. Tone the snow back a bit.

Read this when you have time: http://www.animeforum.com/showthread...for-Wallpapers

You are on the right track none the less. You just have to do research, practice, more research and finally more practice so they aren't very bland.

Thanks for the advice. I didn't even notice that spec of snow before and its annoying the heck outta me now lol.
Question about the snow, by toning it back do you mean i should fade it out some more or there should be less of it?

I'll sit down and read that link later tonight. looks like a good read

[Rainbow Crash]

Thanks for the advice. I didn't even notice that spec of snow before and its annoying the heck outta me now lol.
Question about the snow, by toning it back do you mean i should fade it out some more or there should be less of it?

I'll sit down and read that link later tonight. looks like a good read

Less of it, just take a circle eraser... either increase or decrease the size of the eraser to the size of whichever snow dot you wish to remove ^^ ... I always remove unwanted light orbs that way as too much is too chaotic.

[Kaleohano]

Less of it, just take a circle eraser... either increase or decrease the size of the eraser to the size of whichever snow dot you wish to remove ^^ ... I always remove unwanted light orbs that way as too much is too chaotic.

sorry this took so long. My internet was trippin yesterday.
but here ya go. Is this better?

 

http://i.imgur.com/cvOVA.jpg

[Rainbow Crash]

Much better. Wouldn't you agree? You've even made it not as bright.. Not bad..

[Kaleohano]

Much better. Wouldn't you agree? You've even made it not as bright.. Not bad..

Agreed. Putting the ladies in a blizzard like i did was just cruel haha. My original intention wasn't to change the coloring at all. But i had to redo the filters and gradient maps anyways, Decided to play around with it some and liked the results very much.

Tada! my first "Successful" Wallpaper! haha
may there be more to come

[Ωmega]

Aside from the text being a bit too big [your name and animewallpapers.com should be small and at the bottom of the wall, so the startbar/mac dock bar cover it up]

For a wall thats more abstract, you got a good use of flow here. Im not thrilled with the colors but I see why you chose them, as they come from the stock. It has a sort of Coca-Cola in winter feel for it, and part of me is a little disappointed one of them isnt holding a Coke xD!!!

[Kaleohano]

Aside from the text being a bit too big [your name and animewallpapers.com should be small and at the bottom of the wall, so the startbar/mac dock bar cover it up]

For a wall thats more abstract, you got a good use of flow here. Im not thrilled with the colors but I see why you chose them, as they come from the stock. It has a sort of Coca-Cola in winter feel for it, and part of me is a little disappointed one of them isnt holding a Coke xD!!!

lol a coke can would be appropriate huh?
and yea, i see what you mean by the writing being too big

[boboloko]

not quite my style but its nicely don't better than your previous one

i don't like the splash brushing u have filled the bg with though but nice improvement

[Kaleohano]

not quite my style but its nicely don't better than your previous one

i don't like the splash brushing u have filled the bg with though but nice improvement

splash brush? dafuq are you talking about?