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    Default Gensomaden Saiyuki - Hold the Light - English translation correction

    I would like to correct the English translation of Hold the Light (Gensomaden Saiyuki) , a little typo and a few missing lines in the romaji lyrics. I'd also like to add the kanji version.

    The previous transliterater/translator Anthey Oom doesn't have an account in AnimeForum so I couldn't message him and went here instead. ^^;

    Above is the romaji lyrics and the little typo I corrected is bolded. The added missing lines are bolded too. Below is the English translation and the parts I would like to correct are italicized.

    Nemurezu ni iru ame no furu yoru wa
    Wasureta hazu no kizu ato
    Uzukihajimete kokoro midasu yo

    Taisetsu na mono wo
    Yume no naka nandodemo ushinau
    Mamorikirenakatta koukai wa
    Mou ni do to shitakunai kara

    #Give me sunshine, give me daylight
    Jibun no naka ni hikari motomete
    Shine on, ashita ni wa kumo ga nagarete
    Ame mo agaru hazu da yo

    Toki wo wasureta ame no furu yoru wa
    Nakushita hazu no negai ga
    Kanaerarezu ni yukiba nakusuyo

    Modoranai mono wo
    Yume no naka kurushikute tebanasu
    Yasuragi ni warau ano hibi wa
    Mou ni do to kaeranai kara

    ##Give me sunshine, Give me daylight
    Jibun no naka de hikari egaite
    Shine on, ashita ni wa nureta asahi ga
    Waraikakeru hazu da yo

    Furishikiru amaoto ga yobikakeru
    "Tsurai nara keshisatte shimaeba ii" to
    Donna ni tsumi na omoide sae
    Jibun dake no mono
    Nakushita kunai no sa

    Repeat #
    (There is NO NEED to repeat ##)
    Show me light
    Give me sunshine, shine on me
    Show me light, show me light


    - - - - - - -
    During sleepless, rainy nights,
    Scars I thought I've already forgotten

    Start aching, my heart is disturbed

    My beloved person,
    I lost several times inside my dreams
    Regrets that I couldn't protect them,
    I don't want to repeat twice


    #Give me sunshine, give me daylight
    I'll search for the light inside of me
    Shine on, by tomorrow, the clouds will blow away
    And the rain will also lift

    During rainy nights when I forget about the time
    The prayers that I thought I've given up
    Are losing destination without being answered


    The things that won't return,
    It's so painful that I let go inside my dreams
    Those days when we were laughing peacefully
    Won't go back a second time


    ##Give me sunshine, give me daylight
    I'll draw the light inside of me
    Shine on, by tomorrow, the wet morning sun
    Will smile

    The sound of the rainfall calls out to me
    "If it's painful, why don't you just erase them?"
    Even though those memories are sinful
    The things that are only mine,
    I don't want to lose


    Repeat #
    (There is NO NEED to repeat ##)
    Show me light
    Give me sunshine, shine on me
    Show me light, show me light


    I'll post the kanji version in another post because this is too long already. ^^;

    ---------- Post added at 08:39 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:32 AM ----------

    Kanji version:

    眠れずにいる 雨の降る夜は
    忘れたはずの傷あと
    疼きはじめて 心乱すよ

    大切なものを
    夢の中 何度でも失う
    守りきれなかった 後悔は
    もう二度としたくないから

    Give me sunshine, give me daylight
    自分の中に光求めて
    Shine on 明日には雲が流れて
    雨も上がるはずだよ

    時を忘れた 雨の降る夜は
    失くしたはずの願いが
    叶えられずに 行き場なくすよ

    戻らないものを 夢の中
    苦しくて手放す
    安らぎに笑う あの日々は
    もう二度と帰らないから

    Give me sunshine, give me daylight
    自分の中で 光描いて
    Shine on 明日には濡れた朝日が
    笑いかけるはずだよ

    降りしきる雨音が呼びかける
    「つらいなら消し去ってしまえばいい」と
    どんなに罪な想い出さえ
    自分だけのもの
    なくしたくないのさ

    Give me sunshine, give me daylight
    自分の中に光求めて
    Shine on 明日には雲が流れて
    雨も上がるはずだよ

    Show me light
    Give me sunshine, shine on me
    Show me light, show me light
    Last edited by GenericUserName; 08-02-2012 at 06:41 PM. Reason: Err...the forum ruined the formatting T_T

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    Default Re: Gensomaden Saiyuki - Hold the Light - English translation correction

    Okay, I'm just going to get rid of the "#Repeat" since there's only one repeat and the page would look nicer without the "#Repeat" business.

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    Default Re: Gensomaden Saiyuki - Hold the Light - English translation correction

    Thank you very much! ^_^ (And I wasn't the one who put the repeats. xD)

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