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    Told ya, you could do it. Good job on just doing it! English ain't my first language as well, but try to make some in your own as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Howling Star View Post
    Told ya, you could do it. Good job on just doing it! English ain't my first language as well, but try to make some in your own as well.
    Definetely I will, thanks man, your opinion is sure important for me! I just created a new poem in English (10 times bigger but took over 10 times more time xD),
     
    search it on the poetry forum if you want


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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    Third paragraph is genius, idead every soul needs mending. Nice peom man.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Explorer Oak View Post
    Third paragraph is genius, idead every soul needs mending. Nice peom man.
    Haha, that come out in those inspiration moments when it feels like your brain is faster than you hand writing the verses xD

    Yup, we all need can get better, even Usain Bolt
    Anyways, besides the third paragraph, did you like anything else in particular? [SPOILER]I think I may have wrote it too religiously, but that's what I felt in the "heat of the moment" [SPOILER]


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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    Quote Originally Posted by The 生まれ変わる View Post
    Haha, that come out in those inspiration moments when it feels like your brain is faster than you hand writing the verses xD

    Yup, we all need can get better, even Usain Bolt
    Anyways, besides the third paragraph, did you like anything else in particular? [SPOILER]I think I may have wrote it too religiously, but that's what I felt in the "heat of the moment" [SPOILER]
    Had no impression of religeon in your poem. It just sounded like it came from your heart.

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    Default Re: My First Poem: Random Thoughts

    has a really nice ring and tone to it! really brings up the spirit in a way. but i guess the endings usually do end in some reference to death. i hope i did interpret it right...
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    Default Re: My First Poem: Random Thoughts

    I edited your post for you. Forum default colour should be used for all poems.
    Last edited by OminousCloud; 12-05-2012 at 04:06 AM.


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