Melancholic inspiration.

[Howling Star]

Melancholic inspiration.



Rain drops washing away in the gutter.
Hearts sinking deep in loneliness
People are hypocrites you can hear it in the words they utter.
How can I believe in your last kiss


Your offer I reject.
For love cannot save me
In matter of fact
By the time you read this I’m drowning in the sea

The world is ending, and so am I
The designs of this world
All based on one big lie
And all I have to say, good bye.

[Mugiwara-no-Basuke]

I like it
Doesn't sounds very melodic in matter of rhymes but I really like the poem's concept and the verses by themselves, apart from having extraordinary rhymes or not

And I find the last verse really funny xD