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    Default Ice Water daydream

    Shards of severed suns are scatter
    All across the view
    A canyons scorching spire flare
    Up from under you

    I see you on your skull marked step
    Your venom sword in hand
    From your human throne you rise
    Upon your minions stand

    And I the knight from the east
    Of this canyon wide
    Stare across a challenge
    With insult there implied

    My armor bright and silvered
    At least in my own eye
    To match the dour tones
    Of your howling cry

    But then it fades and I return
    My sanity restored
    I stare at you a softening girl
    Me without a sword

    Did you see me, too, that time?
    See me with armor black
    Were you the silvered one
    With the sunrise at your back?

    But we just look aside
    Cough and walk away
    We can talk about this later
    Always another day
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Default Re: Ice Water daydream

    Again really nice poem, maybe my favourite one from yours
    Love how it ends, you're very gifted with rhymes, makes the poem sound really well


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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