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    Default To a Ski Mask

    No do not move the mask
    Let it cover and obscure
    I cannot bear
    The eyes that stare
    Vacant and demure

    What had they seen
    I cannot, will not say
    I fear to know
    What they will show
    If I linger here and stay

    It was not I who dashed
    It was fate that brought him here
    And I must claim
    Through words profane
    That my conscience should be clear

    But had he held the gun
    And me that one to run
    Would I now lie
    Not him but I
    Shipwrecked ‘neath the sun
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Default Re: To a Ski Mask

    Well done, really nice poem You wrote it?
    I love poetry pretty much but am not used to read it in English, only in portuguese

    The rhymes are great, all the five verses (don't know how you call them separately) sound perfectly
    And you taught me some new words :P

    Keep posting


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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