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    Default Where the River Ends

    Water playing among the dapples that the shadows make
    Hard to tell the threshold of the river from the lapping lake
    What is me and what are marks from social forge
    Watch the river slowly dying as the lake engorge

    River will you tell me where you are going to
    Will you exist when you meet the viral ocean blue
    Will all those other rivers bend you counterfeit
    Slowly becoming part of the Atlantic little bit by bit

    Is there a message written—in your bows and breaks
    And will it last when you vanish, swallowed by the lake
    If there is can I with my tiny hands impoverished pilgrims take
    Your relic from this shrine—remind me what’s at stake
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    Default Re: Where the River Ends

    Am I the only one that loves poetry? :P This is great! Though I prefer "To a Ski Mask"
    And once some few more words add to my english vocabulary :P


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    Default Re: Where the River Ends

    Very nice, good rhythm and tempo, and very nice movement with the story. Well done.

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    Default Re: Where the River Ends

    Quote Originally Posted by threewolves View Post
    Very nice, good rhythm and tempo, and very nice movement with the story. Well done.
    Isn't it?? Dunno why isn't this popular...


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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