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    Default The Wind Keeps All Secrets

    The winds which flow onward to the west
    Have beckoned forth signs of subtle behest,
    Which seizes my breath as I listen in silence
    With wonder of whether the wind is reliant

    Can I rightfully see it's sincerity
    When my eyes only see it's trail,
    Are the tones quite true, I wonder
    Or is there some audible veil

    What cloaks the truth when we ponder reason
    After every piece of the puzzle falls clear,
    Another red herring engenders, a cognitive treason
    What's unknown to humanity embodies fear

    But at this moment when I listen
    To the zephyrs as they pass,
    I take to mind the tranquility
    And it's fallibility so crass

    It's strange to think of worlds
    Where the lie is the shield,
    And the truth is the sword
    Whence the secret is revealed

    The wind keeps all secrets
    And shares nothing but it's presence,
    Deep between it's waves and crests
    Perhaps it knows of heaven

    Until the day I leave; to seek the truth
    I take comfort in my silent friend,
    Who's body is my words and proof
    Of another virtue to defend


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: The Wind Keeps All Secrets

    The wind keeps all secrets
    But I won't keep mine
    Of saying this poem
    Is simply divine

    The more I read
    The more I enjoy
    It's pretty much like a new breed
    Which makes me fill out of joy

    Step by step
    I can see where you get
    With all you rhymes
    That feed me like enzymes

    So, how was I?
    Last edited by Mugiwara-no-Basuke; 07-15-2012 at 07:04 AM.


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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    Default Re: The Wind Keeps All Secrets

    Thank you so much. This is a great poem. You sir are a wordsmith. Wordsmiths have amazing superpowers, they can shape and fashion words and phrases and turn them into beautiful works of art. People have forgotten but words are extremely powerful. You have a gift and Im thankful that you are able to share it with the rest of us.

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    Default Re: The Wind Keeps All Secrets

    Quote Originally Posted by BlackLotus View Post
    Thank you so much. This is a great poem. You sir are a wordsmith. Wordsmiths have amazing superpowers, they can shape and fashion words and phrases and turn them into beautiful works of art. People have forgotten but words are extremely powerful. You have a gift and Im thankful that you are able to share it with the rest of us.
    Definetely agree!


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
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    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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    Default Re: The Wind Keeps All Secrets

    Hahah. Responding to a poem with a poem. Of course.

    Thank you both, though.

    I'm glad you found something from my work.


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: The Wind Keeps All Secrets

    Quote Originally Posted by Tetsanosuke View Post
    Hahah. Responding to a poem with a poem. Of course.

    Thank you both, though.

    I'm glad you found something from my work.
    I just thought that was the best way for replying
    So maybe I am a poet too


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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