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    Default Blood-Brother Betrayal

    Where minds may mire their ponderous desire
    We find the sunder of living brothers-
    In arms laid bare upon paths split in twain
    Where one might wander, the other wonders

    Within the insights of the surreal and the bland
    A sword sits between the two beaten hands,
    An edge for the sweetness of one's desires
    The other for discipline and truth as his bands

    For once they held a banner raised high
    In sequence they walked the roads of the sky,
    And with the trust of the gate and the key
    Until one wills upon the other subjective travesty

    Blame for crimes of belief and of choice
    And held at the throat where he was given no voice,
    A brother of rage could not stand to bare
    Such hands from the other; for desire or care

    As reasons play forward to treasons tried,
    A heavy heart demanded a fairness when denied,
    Though rage was his way, his heart felt true
    That if the brothers fell apart; his sorrow would renew

    The judges were brother and queen so stark,
    A blameless guise of reason rocked-
    An imprinting of belief to burn as a mark
    As they saw the rage burn they'd mock

    Onward with logic and sinner's reprise
    That every star in the sky could be "yours or mine";
    That all are but one and should live as so,
    The individual is not, and such times are old

    But the rage wouldn't stop, as his life was spent-
    Denied of everything, all the rights he was lent;
    By the meaning of life gifted at birth
    His individuality was suddenly deemed absurd

    So how will the brothers reunite once again
    When the rage will not bow to the queen of desire,
    I hope for the sake of the stars and their lives
    That the harmony of 'choice' wipe away such ire.

    A discord of sun and moon in a dance
    Whence swords seek blood of kin,
    Pray release for these souls a'trance
    And shed light on a fight so dim


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: Blood-Brother Betrayal

    Right the first verse charmed quite a lot Probably the one I most enjoyed from your stuff
    Again great rhymes, you really should think of publishing your poems somewhere! Have you ever tried it/want to do it btw?


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    Default Re: Blood-Brother Betrayal

    I'm unsure of how to approach such an enterprise, and I just don't have the energy at the moment to look into it. I'm worrying about other things for the moment.


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    Default Re: Blood-Brother Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by Tetsanosuke View Post
    I'm unsure of how to approach such an enterprise, and I just don't have the energy at the moment to look into it. I'm worrying about other things for the moment.
    Hm, I see, but if you feel like you want to + having time for it don't hesitate for a second 'cause you're really talented my friend!


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    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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