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    Default Forgiveness

    No day goes by without my consent-
    To thank the ones who's time has been lent,
    To me, my worries and my silent woes
    For every second they have given is a treasure trove

    Even as I lay here in my sleepless insurrection
    I can't help but feel a ponderous detachment,
    From all I adore, care for and sometimes fear
    I feel the need for a definite interaction

    I take a stand here in my own lyrical way
    To tell every one: I try not to push them away,
    These scars which I could always feel
    Have taken up flesh and started to heal

    Though I don't guarantee your section is secure
    For now I invite the soul of contrite
    For a chance to be cleansed by the pure-
    Solitude of this fine cloudy night

    If one wish could be made in this revelation
    To be brought true by the gods themselves,
    I would inquire to set fire to this jubilation
    And spread its light to my dear ones as they delve-

    Into their lives; a string of lakes,
    Filled with the concept of quintessence,
    And let it be true- sworn by this solitude
    That such joy never leaves their presence


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Back To Business ~> Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke has a reputation beyond repute Mugiwara-no-Basuke's Avatar
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    Default Re: Forgiveness

    You're really great man, love your poems!

    And to show you my respect here goes my thanksgiven poem xD

    Not a single day goes by
    That I don't understand why
    I feel so great admiration
    For you poethic creation
    Last edited by Mugiwara-no-Basuke; 07-15-2012 at 08:18 AM.


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    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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