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    Default Doubt

    It came crawling to me
    A friend it said
    Its smile white as bone
    And eyes inside its head
    Like two snake-eyes dice
    At Craps rolled
    Some poor fools entire savings
    Now gone and sold

    But its wriggling form wrapped me
    A mistress’s embrace
    Will she my lady catch me here
    Entwined, my face
    Buried in the breast of another?
    My heart staccatos
    “Can you ever reach that spire”
    That chant, a motto

    Rolling tongue long and split
    Two roads apart
    But it begs me not to choose
    But close heart
    And turn myself t’ward home
    So here we come
    I still here lost in my mistress
    With legs to weak to run
    Last edited by Luzifer; 06-19-2012 at 01:52 AM.
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Default Re: Doubt

    No doubt you are talented
    Really nice poem, I especially like the last strophe, thanks a lot for sharing!


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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