Koyasu Takehito - Tiny Little Song

[EJTranslations]

http://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/koya...littlesong.htm

Transliteration

月のゆりかごで
>tsuki no yukira no de
tsuki no yurikago de

地球に落とされた
>jikyuu ni otosareta
chikyuu ni otosareta

何度もキスをするよ　なんにも壊さぬよう
>nandemo KISU wo suruyo nani mo kowasaru wo
nandomo KISU o suru yo nan ni mo kowasanu you

キミの小さな手を
>kimi no chiisana temo
KIMI no chiisa na te o

Translation

1. 月のゆりかごで　キミは揺れている

Current:

Get in the cradle of the moon
You have that swaying feeling

My translation:

You’re rocking in the cradle of the moon

Reasons:

There's no command there, and the two lines/two parts of the line are pretty clearly connected by the で, rather than being separate ideas as they're currently treated.

2. 地球に落とされた　小さな星の中
何度もキスをするよ　なんにも壊さぬよう
そっと

Current:

Don't fall; endure it
Show me the small star inside
Might as well give a harmless kiss
There's nothing to lose.
Secretly...

My translation:

Inside a small star that fell to earth
We kiss many times, softly
So as not to break anything

Reasons:

地球に落とされた is not negative and is modifying 星; "endure it" seems to be coming out of nowhere; 星の中 means "inside the star" and not that the star is inside something else; 何度も is being ignored; キスをするよ sounds like a plain statement of fact rather than a "might as well" thing; 壊す means "break", not "lose".

Here's my full translit and translation:

tsuki no yurikago de KIMI wa yurete iru

chikyuu ni otosareta chiisa na hoshi no naka
nandomo KISU o suru yo nan ni mo kowasanu you
sotto

KIMI no chiisa na te o
mamorinagara
oyasumi oyasumi…

----

You’re rocking in the cradle of the moon

Inside a small star that fell to earth
We kiss many times, softly
So as not to break anything

While protecting
Your small hand
Goodnight, goodnight…

[animeyay]

Just noticed all the "ß" in "Weiß" on the Koyasu Takehito page were incorrectly formatted. Had to fix all of them... =_=

[AzureDark]

Just a pointer that the chara songs are there because of the old site; now chara songs do not need to be put on the seiyuu's J-pop page, unless they are in an album the seiyuu has released.

[EJTranslations]

The funny thing about Tiny Little Song is that it doesn't seem to be on the Weiss Kreuz page at all, only on Koyasu's J-pop page.

[AzureDark]

I checked, and looks like it isn't from Weiss Kreuz at all...

Which means the song should be put on only Koyasu's page, which is liek the reverse of what I've been saying...

[EJTranslations]

Ha, and all this time I've been under the impression that it was from Weiss Kreuz. But then, there was a lot of miscategorization of non-anime-related songs by anime-related artists going on Back In The Day (tm). Not here necessarily, I mean, just in general.

Also, psst, you've now got "Tiny Little Song" under the album "Mary-san no Koneko" while the rest of the songs from that album are under the title "Mary and a Kitten". For whatever it's worth, Amazon.jp lists it under both titles, but the cover of the album itself only has the English.

[AzureDark]

Ah ok, anison.jp only gave me マリーさんと子猫. I usually trust their data but they do prove to be inaccurate sometimes.

Not sure if anyone noticed but no matter what writing style the album's name and singer is the (removable) CD sleeves in Japan are usually not in Roman letters. I believe it's for sorting purposes. Underneath those sleeves would be the rightly-lettered title.