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    Default A Lost Hero in Pensive Thought

    I cannot share these words with you
    With their darkness undefined
    I always try to be the hero
    But this time I can't, oh my~

    I wonder when I can refine
    My thoughts upon this matter,
    As if every step is defined
    By each idea we shatter

    The pieces are our perspectives
    Placed in a porcelain bowl
    Boxed up tight in peridot
    Sent in a downhill roll

    I can not help but wonder
    When I became a villain,
    When heroes' deed fell to bleed
    And the actions equated to killing

    The blood of desire fills red
    Within long strands of tissue,
    Cheeks fire brand't and dry
    Ideas becoming the issue

    Where lays my mind in the sea,
    A water's shine reflects the conscience;
    Where I was sand and you were Calypso
    I held you up and let you go

    But one thing stands clear from this
    When I feel your ocean embrace-
    In the whisper between your words,
    I am also awed by your emollient face

    The shape which haunts my dreams,
    Drawn clear in the winter's breath-
    A beauty that is best, and yet
    Begs my mind to rest

    And here I stand a villain
    Looking through the glass,
    Once a hero, a mirror torn
    Perhaps again when time has passed


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: A Lost Hero in Pensive Thought

    You're so good at poetry, Tetsanosuke! I love your writing. It flows very well. My favorite is the second to last stanza. Would you mind telling me about your process?

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    Default Re: A Lost Hero in Pensive Thought

    First of all, thank you kindly.

    As for my process; it's not too complicated. I use experiences/emotions/concepts/perspectives as the paint, and language as the brush.

    I utilize poetry as an outlet for my emotions, a playground for my thoughts, and I really enjoy seeing how people respond to it. I like to see if they understand my feelings, or if they interpret it in fantastic ways that I didn't think about while writing.

    So; that's more or less my process. As well as a bit more. xD


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    Default Re: A Lost Hero in Pensive Thought

    I like the sound of that. "Playground for my thoughts." You definitely have a way with words and I look forward to seeing more of your poetry. :3

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