Choir jail

[Rei]

Missing a transitory section; along with some minor errors. I don't know what's with the irregular capitalizations, but I'll just assume that she wanted to put some meaning across, so I'll leave them alone.

Watashi yo moete...
Moete dakishimete miru no wa tsumi janai deshou?
Hi de yami wo harae CHOIR JAIL

Nageite mo yume wa utawanai
Koko de sakenda yo "Kotae wa dare ga motteru no"
Utsumuita mama ja kizukanai
Kimi no hitomi no naka Mirai wo sagasu

Moshimo kiseki ga ima wo sasu nara
Nijimu namida nugutte mae wo muite arukou

Watashi wo akete...
Konna kurushisa de nani mo mienai
Watashi yo moete...
Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?
Hi de yami wo harae CHOIR JAIL

Maneite yo mune no otome tachi
Koko wa yoi no meikyuu "Yoake wo doko de matteru no"
Furueteru dake ja kawaranai
Kimi wo mitsuketa no wa Unmei no shiwaza

Naze ni inochi wa hakanaku kieru
Toi wa toi wo yobu yue Ai wo daite hate you

Himitsu no saki e...
Yureru kanashisa wa nani wo abaku no
Himitsu ni furete...
Furete tashika na Genjitsu wo nomeba ii deshou?
Te wo nobase Nobase Saki e...

Nemureru mori yo kisetsu yo
Sakihokoru hana karete mebuite

Watashi wo akete...
Konna kurushisa de nani mo mienai
Watashi yo moete...
Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?
Hi de yami wo harae CHOIR JAIL LONELY JAIL

[nanashipiero]

@Akaruka

If you're talking about the capitalizations like in the line "Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?" it probably means there's a space between the two lines like (I don't know the kanji for real) "燃えて彼方へ　情熱は罪じゃないでしょう?" or something like that.

[Rei]

@Akaruka

If you're talking about the capitalizations like in the line "Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?" it probably means there's a space between the two lines like (I don't know the kanji for real) "燃えて彼方へ　情熱は罪じゃないでしょう?" or something like that.

True. Which is why I left hem alone. It's a matter of personal style, but I usually do a double space there to help people who hse the lyrics to sing, since capitalizing the lettersis...

[AzureDark]

Ah... prolly missed this post but...

Link?

[Rei]

Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/amnesia/choirjail.htm

Now that I think of it, there's translation missing for that short section, isn't there? :/

And it might not be in my place to say this lol, but I think it's time to review some of MewPudding's work? Maybe suggest it to her...

Some stuff in Choir Jail: "Kotae wa dare ka ga motteru no" / "Who is the answer waiting for?", Naze ni inochi wa hanakaku kieru / Why is life so fragile and disappear?

and Synchrogazer: Fureau tabi modokashisa ga tsunoru / As we touch each other, impatient is invited into me.

[AzureDark]

I have a few er... things to discuss with her t/ls too. I dunno if she's the type who's actually open to have her t/ls discussed (met quite a few blockheads in my life, sigh) but I'll try to talk to her sometime soon and if she is willing, you can proceed with your own discussions yourself.

[Rei]

Hmm, cool. Er, I'm not sure if I'm actually eligible to discuss translational errors, since I can only spot if something is wronh, just not discuss it in detail yet.

[Rei]

Just posting to edit a mistake in the correction...correctception? No:

Moshi mo kiseki ga ima wo sasu nara
Nijimu namida nugutte Mae wo muite arukou