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    Default Choir jail

    Missing a transitory section; along with some minor errors. I don't know what's with the irregular capitalizations, but I'll just assume that she wanted to put some meaning across, so I'll leave them alone.

    Watashi yo moete...
    Moete dakishimete miru no wa tsumi janai deshou?
    Hi de yami wo harae CHOIR JAIL

    Nageite mo yume wa utawanai
    Koko de sakenda yo "Kotae wa dare ga motteru no"
    Utsumuita mama ja kizukanai
    Kimi no hitomi no naka Mirai wo sagasu

    Moshimo kiseki ga ima wo sasu nara
    Nijimu namida nugutte mae wo muite arukou


    Watashi wo akete...
    Konna kurushisa de nani mo mienai
    Watashi yo moete...
    Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?
    Hi de yami wo harae CHOIR JAIL

    Maneite yo mune no otome tachi
    Koko wa yoi no meikyuu "Yoake wo doko de matteru no"
    Furueteru dake ja kawaranai
    Kimi wo mitsuketa no wa Unmei no shiwaza

    Naze ni inochi wa hakanaku kieru
    Toi wa toi wo yobu yue Ai wo daite hate you

    Himitsu no saki e...
    Yureru kanashisa wa nani wo abaku no
    Himitsu ni furete...
    Furete tashika na Genjitsu wo nomeba ii deshou?
    Te wo nobase Nobase Saki e...

    Nemureru mori yo kisetsu yo
    Sakihokoru hana karete mebuite

    Watashi wo akete...
    Konna kurushisa de nani mo mienai
    Watashi yo moete...
    Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?
    Hi de yami wo harae CHOIR JAIL LONELY JAIL

    恋ではなく、愛ではなく。
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    Default Re: Choir jail

    @Akaruka

    If you're talking about the capitalizations like in the line "Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?" it probably means there's a space between the two lines like (I don't know the kanji for real) "燃えて彼方へ 情熱は罪じゃないでしょう?" or something like that.

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    Default Re: Choir jail

    Quote Originally Posted by alisaallthat View Post
    @Akaruka

    If you're talking about the capitalizations like in the line "Moete kanata e Jounetsu wa tsumi janai deshou?" it probably means there's a space between the two lines like (I don't know the kanji for real) "燃えて彼方へ 情熱は罪じゃないでしょう?" or something like that.
    True. Which is why I left hem alone. It's a matter of personal style, but I usually do a double space there to help people who hse the lyrics to sing, since capitalizing the lettersis...
    Last edited by Rei; 05-03-2012 at 07:02 PM.

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    Default Re: Choir jail

    Ah... prolly missed this post but...

    Link?

    ...so that you know where you can find me

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    Default Re: Choir jail

    Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/amnesia/choirjail.htm

    Now that I think of it, there's translation missing for that short section, isn't there? :/

    And it might not be in my place to say this lol, but I think it's time to review some of MewPudding's work? Maybe suggest it to her...

    Some stuff in Choir Jail: "Kotae wa dare ka ga motteru no" / "Who is the answer waiting for?", Naze ni inochi wa hanakaku kieru / Why is life so fragile and disappear?

    and Synchrogazer: Fureau tabi modokashisa ga tsunoru / As we touch each other, impatient is invited into me.
    Last edited by Rei; 05-12-2012 at 11:43 PM.

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    Default Re: Choir jail

    I have a few er... things to discuss with her t/ls too. I dunno if she's the type who's actually open to have her t/ls discussed (met quite a few blockheads in my life, sigh) but I'll try to talk to her sometime soon and if she is willing, you can proceed with your own discussions yourself.

    ...so that you know where you can find me

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    Default Re: Choir jail

    Hmm, cool. Er, I'm not sure if I'm actually eligible to discuss translational errors, since I can only spot if something is wronh, just not discuss it in detail yet.

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    Default Re: Choir jail

    Just posting to edit a mistake in the correction...correctception? No:

    Moshi mo kiseki ga ima wo sasu nara
    Nijimu namida nugutte Mae wo muite arukou

    恋ではなく、愛ではなく。
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