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    As I look upon the green prairies
    My eyes get filled with tears.
    Centaurs , Minotaurs and faeries
    Yet suddenly it all disappears.

    Such a beautiful fantasy
    Exists only inside my head,
    Though quickly I start to see
    The harsh reality calling to me
    Oh , why couldn't I stay here instead?
    Riding dolphins in the sea...

    In this world I am the ruler
    And there's no such thing as sadness
    For this reality is much gentler,
    Filled with adventure , joy and happiness.

    So I cant imagine greater sorrows
    Than to be without being,
    To see while never seeing
    The magical reality that after dreams follows.

    This is the first poem I've ever completely wrote... Usually i am never happy with them so i always throw them away.

    Feedback is appreciated , and i am not a native English speaker , so if you see anything wrong , please do point it out.
    Last edited by Munchman; 05-04-2012 at 11:43 AM.
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    Default Re: Imagination

    This is good. Especially for your first poem and the fact that you are not an native English speaker o.o
    Personally, I love it because it reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back with a similar theme. Fantasy is so much more appealing than everyday life. Only one thing I would change and it's probably just a typo anyways but when I read the poem I saw that you had "tough" but that didn't really make sense so I quickly realized that it should have been "though." It threw me off a little. Also, how come you don't capitalize your "I"s? ._.

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    @Princess Cupcake

    Thanks for the feedback ,you were right , it was a typo , I just didn't notice it. Fixed it and capitalized all the "I"'s...
    And you are right , fantasy is a lot better than reality.
    “The unreal is more powerful than the real, because nothing is as perfect as you can imagine it. because its only intangible ideas, concepts, beliefs, fantasies that last. stone crumbles. wood rots. people, well, they die. but things as fragile as a thought, a dream, a legend, they can go on and on.” - Chuck Palahniuk

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