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    Default Diapsalmata: Verse 1

    She came out from the shower
    Hair like driven rain
    Her smile soft and cryptic
    Said “we will meet again
    Maybe when we’re older
    Maybe when reborn”
    I wish I could take credit
    But I am but a horn

    So like a horn I’ll play
    I’ll sing her departing song
    And maybe if I’m lucky
    I’ll be back again ere long
    As another passing goes by
    And sorrow grips my heart
    My hands will quickly clatter
    As my imagination starts

    So life don’t hide you anguish
    Show that bloody face
    So I can stare right at it
    And draw it up in lace
    Peel back those cracking lips
    And flash that twisted maw
    So people can experience
    The things I never saw
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Default Re: Diapsalmata: Verse 1

    Show that bloody face
    So I can stare right at it
    And draw it up in lace
    Absolutely love this part! It's beautiful~ But did you mean for the first line of the third stanza to say "you"? I almost feel like it should be "your".

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