[Warning-Panty Shot] Sexy Hunter

[Light Buster]

I feel that this particular wall is unfinished yet I feel that I like to show it to everyone for some advice.

Character/Anime: Sorry, no idea.
Time: 2 Hours

[Matt~]

Cant really give you advice but i really like the picture
Cant give you advice since compared to me whos never tried doing a wallpaper, its god like...

[AkanoYoru]

D'awww, she's adorable. But the title text could use some embellishment.

[Gero50]

This looks really good. The only thing I would adjust or do different next time is add more styling to the text so it blends a little better. Other then that very good work LB.

[Light Buster]

Okay, made some text changes.

[AkanoYoru]

She seems a little transparent in some places - specifically on her legs and right arm. Also the linework on her could use a bit of smoothing out
And I have a burning question: how do you get the lineart to be so smooth? Practice or a stabilizer?

[Light Buster]

She seems a little transparent in some places - specifically on her legs and right arm. Also the linework on her could use a bit of smoothing out
And I have a burning question: how do you get the lineart to be so smooth? Practice or a stabilizer?

I placed an overlayed layer over her and as for the linework, I scaled the image down and nothing else and turned out to be better. :P

[Darkcobra]

That's looking great in my opinion. Really like the new text improvements (the text seems somewhat suited with this style). I will say its looking real good, i will have a look over it in more detail tomorrow when im fully awake and see if i can see any improvements but so far its lookin great

[ButzYung]

Maybe it's just me, but the background doesn't fit well with the gal.

[Chi The Sweet]

its cute but but...um ..um i noticed other things a bit closer!