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    Default Datengoku Sensen corrections

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    tomarumono guka na rishi
    tomarumono orokanarishi

    narari hirari yubi ni fureta
    harari hirari yubi ni fureta

    chippoke na kouhuku
    chippoke na koufuku (preference of romanization though)

    mizamou matotta kizuato ni yume wo
    kizamou matotta kizuato ni yume wo

    uzumoresou na kyou no kiaku
    umerusou na kyou no kioku

    tsunakeru tameni ashita he
    tsungaeru tameni ashita he

    There might be more but it sounds like a better idea if someone who can really read and understand Japanese to romanize this from scratch.

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    Default Re: Datengoku Sensen corrections

    Quote Originally Posted by arsmagna View Post
    tsungaeru tameni ashita he
    I think you meant to write "tsunageru" here.

    There are some other ones:

    tomarumono
    todomaru mono

    bokura wa kami no tsukuritamauta
    bokura wa kami no tsukuritamouta

    shippaisaki no tada utsukushii
    shippaisaku no tada utsukushii

    yowasa wo idaku ningyou ka
    yowasa wo daku ningyou ka

    kakakeyou subete wo tsukimeku kisaki
    kakageyou subete wo tsukinuku kisaki

    shinjite michi naru ore no tsuyosa wo
    shinjite michi naru onore no tsuyosa wo

    harari hirari oyubi wa yagate
    harari hirari yubi wa yagate

    hounaumono shizuka na rishi
    otonau mono shizukanarishi

    Also, the romaji of the title should be Datenkoku Sensen.

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    Default Re: Datengoku Sensen corrections

    Yea...that's a lot of mistakes lol
    I'll probably just revamp the whole thing (and add the translation too) when I'm bored at work today~

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    Default Re: Datengoku Sensen corrections

    Is everything else the submitter had done as bad as this? If so we should revoke their access...
    Last edited by AzureDark; 12-28-2011 at 11:33 AM.

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    Default Re: Datengoku Sensen corrections

    New link (w/fixed song title): Datenkoku Sensen


    Quote Originally Posted by AzureDark View Post
    Is everything else the submitter had done as bad as this?
    Here's his profile if you wanna take a look, too: obliv. I randomly skimmed through one song, but didn't find any obvious mistakes in that one.

    I think he's proficient enough to do intermediate-leveled songs, but Ali Project was too much for him. Don't think we need to worry about him anymore, though, seeing that he has been inactive for over 2 years now lol.

    ---------- Post added at 12:24 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:18 AM ----------

    oh oh, btw, while I have you, Azu, did you sort these songs on this page?
    It's fine; it's just that I thought you said OP's and ED's should not be sorted into albums?

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    Default Re: Datengoku Sensen corrections

    No I didn't... wow, between us who the heck would do that...
    It'd probably be Ayu, since she put up some songs in it.
    I'll go contact her then...
    Last edited by AzureDark; 12-29-2011 at 02:24 AM.

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