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    Default Can you guys critique my art... plz

    My computer is being a jerk and won't let me upload or link correctly so:
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    Thank guys and I apologize for the trouble. I've been drawing for about a year and a half now.
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    Default Re: Can you guys critique my art... plz

    Overall its good~i think you need to improve your hands and the legs you drew look too thin~also~~if this girl is really standing upside down~~her clothe shouldn't look like that~however~well...if you draw it correctly the mod might lock this though~~]D

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    Default Re: Can you guys critique my art... plz

    It's not bad, but it does look a little stiff. Is the character tripping, or falling from a substantial height? I only ask, due to that fact that a body isn't very stiff when falling...gravity has this odd way or affecting the limbs of the body. Study photos of sky divers in free fall, you'll see what I mean.

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    Default Re: Can you guys critique my art... plz

    I think it is GOOD...
    hahaha im not good in Art but you your work is GOOD...
    Keep it up...
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    Default Re: Can you guys critique my art... plz

    your form and proportion is good but adding a little more depth with some shading would make the figures pop

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