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    Default ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    This is my first time posting, and I apologize beforehand if I'm doing this the wrong way.

    The lyric that I would like to correct is the translation for ALI PROJECT's KOPPERIA no Hitsugi.

    1. Lyric in romaji: warera tsukuri tamaishi kami
    Current translation: The god that created us from pebbles
    Suggested revision: The god that created us

    In this case, tamaishi is a combination of tamai and shi. Tamai is the ren'youkei of the yodan verb tamau, which is a respectful way of saying kureru, kudasaru. Shi is the rentaikei of the auxiliary verb ki, which is used to indicate a past, completed action. This is a form normally used in classical Japanese, and all together, tsukuri tamaishi would be equivalent to tsukutte kudasatta in modern Japanese.

    2. Lyric in romaji: warera sukui tamaeru kami
    Current translation: The god that can grant us salvation
    Suggested revision: The got that salvaged us

    Again, tamaeru is a combination of tamae and ru and is a classical usage. Tamae is the meireikei of tamau and ru is the rentaikei of ri, which indicates a completed action continuing into the present. All together, sukui tamaeru is equivalent to sukutte kudasatta in modern Japanese. (The nuance of continuing into the present is quite hard to incorporate into a modern translation.)

    Thanks for reading.

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    Default Re: ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    We must contact @Lady Elwen for her approval first.

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    Default Re: ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    She hasn't been around since 2008; I'm not sure if I would get a reply...
    I apologize if I should have contacted the original translator before posting--it was not mentioned in the guideline in the case the correction is not minor.
    Last edited by Hinamawari; 11-13-2011 at 01:37 AM.

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    Uhhh, my head hurts :0 too much confusing information.... Lol

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    Default Re: ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    If we don't get a reply from Lady Elwin within a week, then I guess we can assume she's no longer "active".

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    Default Re: ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    I approve these changes. Thank you for the detailed explanation!

    I guess I'm not the one who romanized it (actually, as a I recall, my translation was originally submitted as a correction as well), but I kind of think the spacing in the romanization should be changed, too. But maybe that is more a matter of preference/convention that something that is strictly incorrect.

    Also, I am totally inactive, and wouldn't have seen this if AzureDark (?) hadn't emailed me about it, so don't feel bad for not having contact me first.
    Last edited by Lady Elwen; 11-19-2011 at 08:16 PM.

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    Default Re: ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    Yes it was I who emailed you...

    I am giving special dispensation to Hinamawari to replace the romaji as credit for bringing up the correction. Hinamawari please post your romaji of Coppelia no Hitsuji here if you may.
    Last edited by AzureDark; 11-20-2011 at 08:32 AM.

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    Default Re: ALI PROJECT - KOPPERIA no Hitsugi

    Thanks for replying, Lady Elwen :)

    As for the romaji, I don't have any particular problem with it (plus I'm not really fond of romanizing), so I guess it's fine for now unless someone else wants to change it.

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