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    Default Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    I'd like to thank the tutorials that helped me along to drawing this good, it took me about 2 hours to realise there is millions of ways to coloring pictures. Here is Coby the wolf comic panel 1 and two.



    This is the first panel of my comic book. Please comment.
    I'd apreciate any feedback.

    ---------- Post added at 04:19 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:18 PM ----------

    Here is an improvement of the art.


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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    I don't understand what's going on between the two panels.

    Wolf says something about got all of them and the 2nd says you forgot your stuff I think.

    Point A jumps to Point C or D but there is no transition.

    There also is a spelling error for the word "Sur" I think it "Sure" ?? Or maybe Sur Is a name.

    The comic is hard to follow because of this.

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    I edited it check again. These are only two slides. the new ones will be there around wednesday

    ---------- Post added at 06:03 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:09 PM ----------

    New one I think this one is better



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    This is the completed one, well the text should still be entered, have to think this one over
    Last edited by FlashD; 11-03-2011 at 08:25 AM. Reason: Don't double post. Use the edit button instead.

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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    I don't understand them either. But it's hard to see the actual art too. It looks like you're painting on top of water but you're trying hard to not let the ripples move the paint from its position. Especially on the right panel.


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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.



    Completed one. I promise sometimes it looks worse on other computers. This is actaully a very good drawing. plus the wolf isn't painted on the ripples at all. plus its a blue wall of a mad asylum. I believe

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    It was a comparison... The result looks like you're trying to paint on water but you can't contain water thus it makes it look like it's not very clean and focused. In my personal opinion I don't like it. I don't understand it and can barely make out what you're trying to draw which in turn makes the piece unsuccessful.


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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    I can tell that the image on the left, is at least to me a (dog?) sitting at a bar (I guess) smoking? Breathing fire? The panel on the right is the confusing one to me...I can't tell what's going on?
    It's always in the last place you'd think of looking!


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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    Well you might not like it. but I do. there are just a few people who would like the comic graphic novel. Plus some say its a mixture between marylin manson and picasso. you wouldn't know what's going on because your graphics card isn't good enough. I have a very high graphics card. So I'll say to me this looks perfect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bysen View Post
    Well you might not like it. but I do. there are just a few people who would like the comic graphic novel. Plus some say its a mixture between marylin manson and picasso. you wouldn't know what's going on because your graphics card isn't good enough. I have a very high graphics card. So I'll say to me this looks perfect.
    Honey you can't blame it on graphics cards. That's not how it works seeing as mine may actually be better than yours. But I suggest you not start drawing if you can't accept the fact that not all of your works are great. And the absolute worst thing you can do is to say your art is a mixture of two great artist when it's not. Not being mean or rude just telling you some facts. Also that comic isn't really a "comic" Two panels that do not follow comic format, nor have no story to it. I suggest you research what comics look like and learn about text placement and building up to main events etc. The red lines on the outside of the panel and the green highlight over the text needs to go. Your animal anatomy is horrid. I suggest you look at real pictures of what you're trying to draw.

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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    Oh ok, but you can't say your graphics card is better. Here is a new picture. I love the wolf's hand here, I'm trying to think of how to edit the face... But for now... here is a new one. I have a G force graphics card for 3D animation and graphics, also a 3GB RAM....

    Version 2:


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    Lets see my specs are

    2.3 GHz Intel Core i5 dual-core processor ("Sandy Bridge") with 3 MB shared L3 cache
    Intel HD Graphics 3000 with 384 MB of DDR3 SDRAM
    320 GB Serial ATA hard drive (5400 RPM)
    4 GB RAM (1333 MHz DDR3; supports up to 8 GB)

    --not to mention graphics cards has to do with PC games. Not images on the internet.

    I do not understand the background. Looks like random green and white. The actual wolf is too dark. and has green hands :/ Seriously look up wolf anatomy. It looks like a horse head sweety and his "hands" are way out of proportion from wrist which is out of proportion from arms... Both hands are two entirely different shapes and sizes. You're going to have to work a little more at your tutorials you're reading or find new ones.
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    Default Re: Coby the wolf comic book art- comments appreciated.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bysen View Post
    Well you might not like it. but I do. there are just a few people who would like the comic graphic novel. Plus some say its a mixture between marylin manson and picasso. you wouldn't know what's going on because your graphics card isn't good enough. I have a very high graphics card. So I'll say to me this looks perfect.
    I'm running a Evga GeForce GTx 560 Ti DS SC 1GB card...so it's NOT that.
    It's always in the last place you'd think of looking!


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    This is the chinaren monster, my look on how he'd look like, he is just without his pronounced nose. It's a character in a website. I'm sure It's just a way of saying sorry... yea anyway... Here is the monster. Thanks for commenting honestly

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    mine is a g force 4900

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    Hey you can actually see this one! Much improvement ^___^ Se now that wasn't so bad now was it. Still has a few things off but I don't care since I can at least see it.


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    Canyou point me to tutorials that has someone speaking and showing around photoshop on only coloring, pen inking I can learn by myself.



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    Last edited by FlashD; 11-05-2011 at 06:41 AM. Reason: Don't double post, use the EDIT button or respect the two days delay.

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