Lies

[ELR]

Lies
There are so many moments where I suffocate,
So many days of lies and submission fate,
A great many swallows of these hallow words-
All I want to do is cry-Loving you, that's absurd.

Every time they escape those putrid lips,
It's like a bear mauling with his accusatory tips,
It stabs me in chest of these deceitful lies,
Just tell me, why become my demise?

I love you-All repeated in gray..
So untrue-The reason why I became dismay..
Wish I could tell you what I really feel..
I don't love you, I have to break the deal..

[Kaname Shikara]

I like it ^^ seems like sad poetry has a better feel than happy poetry...not sure why >.< maybe it just flows better. Or I read too much Edgar Allan Poe.

[SuXrys]

Lies
There are so many moments where I suffocate,

Exactly my thoughts when I found out that the cake is a lie! O_O

... -_-

No but seriously good poem. A little sad thought. Just as you recently have been heartbroken.
I like it. Not that you may have been heartbroken, but the poem.. eh.. you know what I mean. :/

I like it ^^ seems like sad poetry has a better feel than happy poetry...not sure why >.< maybe it just flows better. Or I read too much Edgar Allan Poe.

Perhaps.