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    Default I Deem Thee Worthy

    Profusely refusing
    the fusion of Illusion
    and False Conclusion
    as being bitter black lies
    gouging out your eyes.
    Adopting them as
    realities, not seeing
    their hidden calamities.

    Abusing, throwing away
    and reusing you
    like the empty
    crushed pop
    can you are, at least
    they think you are.

    Alluding,
    to words foul and dirty
    I deem thee worthy
    to see right through
    a sad excuse for
    what they're
    eluding you
    those
    Truths that are
    ingrained in you
    and have always
    been THERE.

    bleak and weak
    like a gull with
    a broken beak
    like a seed
    getting
    hammered into
    oblivion

    Something that's kept from you
    that's originally yours is a reason
    for mourning. Fresh milk right
    out of the goat soured to keep
    sinister intentions afloat.

    but it's okay
    they can
    kill chew gnaw
    at you all they want
    for
    two many negatives equals a positive.


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    Default Re: I Deem Thee Worthy

    A very nice poem. I like the fast paced rhythm you produced from the structure and rhyme scheme. It is also has a real modern feel to it. Keep up the nice work!
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    Default Re: I Deem Thee Worthy

    Thank you! (^_^)


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    Default Re: I Deem Thee Worthy

    Great as ever Kirei! ^^ I always love your poetry.

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: I Deem Thee Worthy

    As always, thank you. ^_^


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