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    There are so many moments where I suffocate,
    So many days of lies and submission fate,
    A great many swallows of these hallow words-
    All I want to do is cry-Loving you, that's absurd.

    Every time they escape those putrid lips,
    It's like a bear mauling with his accusatory tips,
    It stabs me in chest of these deceitful lies,
    Just tell me, why become my demise?

    I love you-All repeated in gray..
    So untrue-The reason why I became dismay..
    Wish I could tell you what I really feel..
    I don't love you, I have to break the deal..
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
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    I like it ^^ seems like sad poetry has a better feel than happy poetry...not sure why >.< maybe it just flows better. Or I read too much Edgar Allan Poe.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Lies

    Quote Originally Posted by Blossoming Little Rose View Post
    Lies
    There are so many moments where I suffocate,

    Exactly my thoughts when I found out that the cake is a lie! O_O

    ... -_-

    No but seriously good poem. A little sad thought. Just as you recently have been heartbroken.

    I like it. Not that you may have been heartbroken, but the poem.. eh.. you know what I mean. :/



    Quote Originally Posted by Kaname Shikara View Post
    I like it ^^ seems like sad poetry has a better feel than happy poetry...not sure why >.< maybe it just flows better. Or I read too much Edgar Allan Poe.

    Perhaps.
    Last edited by SuXrys; 09-14-2011 at 04:13 PM.

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