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    Default Whispers Upon the Evening Wind

    It's been some time since I've shared a poem and someone has convinced me that I should post this one, so here goes nothing~!

    Shadow creeps upon us as Helios concludes his journeys,
    The skies of Zeus, by Dysis, are painted,
    Ah, the Anemoi are once again at work, beckoning me
    to Poseidon’s shores,
    Perhaps they have called upon the aid of the Nephelai
    for even the clouds bear meanings this sundown!
    I hear the Anemoi, their faint murmurs steal across my skin,
    A tingling sensation slinks ‘round my being
    as the Anemoi call out:

    Melinda, Melinda, venture to the shores
    this evening, fair one!
    Do you not await the one who rests beyond the waters
    of the Mediterranean?
    Melinda, wise maiden, perhaps Athena may convince thee?

    Oh, how the Anemoi pull at my heartstrings,
    Athena would, without a doubt, convince me,
    But the judicious Goddess stands not before me, does she?
    Arktos, I beg of thee, come quickly and darken the heavens
    so that I may return to my home and think no more of this…
    I wish not to be lured towards the waters
    lest I become disheartened with what lies therein,
    Yet the Anemoi call out to me:

    Melinda, Melinda, venture to the shores
    this evening, fair one!
    Would you not take chance and walk upon the sands
    to see the one you pine for?
    Melinda, sweet maiden, do you question what you feel in your heart?

    Questions do indeed, from this, arise,
    The heart speaks one faith and the mind another.
    Thus, I am torn two ways and rendered unable to choose,
    With weary eyes, I glance towards the seas
    And remember my promises.
    No, tonight, I shall not find myself upon the beach,
    But I remain faithful, patiently awaiting your return
    without doubts.

    ||Uta's MellBell||Xanfiore's Imouto||Ryuu's Little Sister||


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    Default Re: Whispers Upon the Evening Wind

    A very nice poem. It reminds me of something one would read from the Renaissance period. Keep up the great poems!
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    Default Re: Whispers Upon the Evening Wind

    Quote Originally Posted by ghostthegreat View Post
    A very nice poem. It reminds me of something one would read from the Renaissance period. Keep up the great poems!
    Thank you very much :3 I appreciate the comment ^^

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    Default Re: Whispers Upon the Evening Wind

    Very Godlike. xD it's Good. ^-^

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    Default Re: Whispers Upon the Evening Wind

    I really like how you put all the named in it ^^ it's a nice poem, thanks for posting ^-^

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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