AnimeGalleries [dot] NetAnimeWallpapers [dot] ComAnimeLyrics [dot] ComAnimePedia [dot] ComAnimeGlobe [dot] Com

User Tag List

+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: A Work in Progress...

  1. #1
    Senior Member Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster's Avatar
    Gil
    34,395.36
    Gender
    My Mood
    Fine
    Gifts Systems Xbox 360 American Flag Ribbon AK47
    Mentioned
    330 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    01-21-2015 12:14 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    California
    Age
    23
    Threads
    140
    Posts
    7,196
    Blog Entries
    59
    AW Wallpapers
    1
    Rep Power
    2258
    Gamer IDs

    Gamertag: Light Buster PSN ID: Lightbuster88

    Default A Work in Progress...

    Okay, I'm totally lost here. Don't know what to do about anything about this wall here I'm currently making. Any advise would be greatly appreciated.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Click image for larger version

Name:	Work in Progress.jpg‎
Views:	27
Size:	404.2 KB
ID:	49080  

  2. #2
    Copyright 2013 FS FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD has a reputation beyond repute FlashD's Avatar
    Gil
    4,174.18
    Gender
    My Mood
    Lonely
    Gifts Ice Cream Bamboo Cup Notebook
    Mentioned
    147 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    01-27-2015 07:51 AM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Location
    I would like to know that too. O_o;;
    Age
    30
    Threads
    146
    Posts
    2,736
    Blog Entries
    5
    AW Wallpapers
    3
    Rep Power
    2191
    Gamer IDs

    Gamertag: Felsho

    Default Re: A Work in Progress...

    Hmm ... the background and the character do not match. You cannot use 3D CG backgrounds with anime characters just like that. Use some filters on it to make it less CG like. Also the background is too dark compared to the character. I'd suggest you lighten it up a bit or replace it. The current text is too big too. Your name and the website's URL need to be very small, so they get hidden under the task bar of an older system (like Windows XP).

    About how to go further ... the wall is currently rather empty. I'd suggest you add text to the left (maybe a logo) and blend it with the background (here exaggeration is not wrong otherwise it will stand out too much). You can also add one more character to the right side or just add more effects, C4Ds, lights ... something behind the current character.

    Hope it helps. ^_^

  3. #3
    Senior Member Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster's Avatar
    Gil
    34,395.36
    Gender
    My Mood
    Fine
    Gifts Systems Xbox 360 American Flag Ribbon AK47
    Mentioned
    330 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    01-21-2015 12:14 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    California
    Age
    23
    Threads
    140
    Posts
    7,196
    Blog Entries
    59
    AW Wallpapers
    1
    Rep Power
    2258
    Gamer IDs

    Gamertag: Light Buster PSN ID: Lightbuster88

    Default Re: A Work in Progress...

    All right, I made some improvement on it (if you want to call it that way). I still feel I need more done on it so C&C would be great.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Click image for larger version

Name:	Touhg Girls.jpg‎
Views:	23
Size:	606.6 KB
ID:	49269  

  4. #4
    Goddess (Mom <333) Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako has a reputation beyond repute Princess Minako's Avatar
    Gil
    214,578,841.26
    Gender
    My Mood
    Busy
    Gifts Dr Who Tardis Dr Who SonicScrewdriver Dr Who K9
    Mentioned
    4 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    09-05-2011 03:24 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Threads
    197
    Posts
    15,658
    AW Wallpapers
    32
    Rep Power
    52325

    Default Re: A Work in Progress...

    I think you need to answer the question "What am I trying to convey with the wallpaper"

    Is there an emotion or a theme? Otherwise the parts do not equal the whole and it just looks like stuff piled on. Find a theme and build off of that; just putting one cool thing ontop of another doesn't necessarily mean they'll flow. Beaches are cool and so are spaceships... but putting a spaceship on a beach looks awkward.
    A simple kiss can warm an entire body



  5. Likes Ezza Obsuna liked this post
  6. #5
    Senior Member Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster has a reputation beyond repute Light Buster's Avatar
    Gil
    34,395.36
    Gender
    My Mood
    Fine
    Gifts Systems Xbox 360 American Flag Ribbon AK47
    Mentioned
    330 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    01-21-2015 12:14 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    California
    Age
    23
    Threads
    140
    Posts
    7,196
    Blog Entries
    59
    AW Wallpapers
    1
    Rep Power
    2258
    Gamer IDs

    Gamertag: Light Buster PSN ID: Lightbuster88

    Default Re: A Work in Progress...

    Wow, never took that question into account. Thanks, I'll have to revise this wall...

  7. #6
    Member WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid has a brilliant future WoodKid's Avatar
    Gil
    60.39
    Gender
    My Mood
    Pensive
    Gifts Gemini Naruto Headband
    Mentioned
    1 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    12-24-2011 10:35 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Sep 2011
    Location
    Keewaywin,CANADA
    Threads
    2
    Posts
    42
    Blog Entries
    1
    Rep Power
    0
    Gamer IDs

    Gamertag: EgoRapturexxx

    Default Re: A Work in Progress...

    Your second attempt looks much better. the only thing I pick at is the text.....maybe a diffirent color oh and the bright light at the far left is very disstracting kinda takes away the attention of the girls booty. Choose one point in the wallpaper and incorparate your idea around that point. keep it flowing.

    WK

  8. #7
    Saved Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices has a reputation beyond repute Archaic Devices's Avatar
    Gil
    5,597,404.45
    Gender
    My Mood
    Bashful
    Gifts Telescope Baka Be Mine
    Mentioned
    297 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    07-21-2014 11:13 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Threads
    258
    Posts
    2,226
    Blog Entries
    22
    AW Wallpapers
    1
    Rep Power
    2455

    Default Re: A Work in Progress...

    When making a wallpaper, you need to either A) Take in the character's personality and use that as a basis, or B) Take in the character's look and outfit and use that as a basis. As I have no idea what their personality is, I would go by looks. The girls are exposing a lot of skin, so I would try to make the background have a light orange, or peach color to it. Or at least have that color repeating throughout the background. I see you have purple in the background, which is good considering the one girl's hair is purple. Most of your background is just C4D, so try downloading some brushes, and use some of the effects on either Photoshop or Gimp to spice up your wallpaper a bit. Make sure to blend your character into the background, but not too much. I like to smudge just a bit in order to blend. Also, try to only use on character. Having multiple focal points can get confusing for the person using the wallpaper. Try to stay away from such bright lights like on the left. If you use bright lights like that, try putting it behind the character. It might surprise you and actually enhance your piece a bit. Make sure the font of your text always matches the mood or look of your wallpaper, or the words themselves. I would recommend downloading a bunch of different fonts, as default fonts don't always work. Also, make sure you try to blend the words as best as possible. That's a tough challenge, and I know a lot of great sig/wall makers who still have a tough time with that.

    All in all, I would recommend using a tutorial. Until you develop a style, using tutorials really help. At first I didn't use any tutorials, but after using some I learned a lot of different features I didn't know about, and now I use those features quite a bit to enhance my sigs/wallpapers.

    Sig by Feferi <3


    "Don't go around saying the world owes you a living. The world owes you nothing. It was here first."
    -Mark Twain

+ Reply to Thread

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

     

Similar Threads

  1. A work in progress, I need advice on....
    By konkikushuro in forum Digital Art
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 08-09-2011, 12:18 AM
  2. BRS Fanart, a Work In Progress.
    By ApocalypsePlease in forum Traditional Art
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 12-07-2010, 07:15 PM
  3. Lucid Girl (work in progress)
    By sylvi in forum Fan Fiction / Prose
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 04-18-2010, 03:04 PM
  4. Sig or wall? A work in progress.
    By Fourstarball in forum Digital Art
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 02-19-2007, 06:39 PM
  5. work in progress
    By Princess Minako in forum Wallpapers
    Replies: 11
    Last Post: 05-11-2006, 11:04 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts