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    Default A Poem: Tick Tock

    I haven't written poetry in years, but here's a little something;

    Tick tock look out the window
    The rain falls but the sun soars.
    Ring around the rosies
    Your heart is no longer there.
    A kiss upon the cheek
    Make your spirit still.

    Don't look back.
    Last edited by Sawada Ieyasu; 06-22-2011 at 03:31 AM.
    Where there is light, shadows lurk and fear reigns... yet by the blade of Knights, mankind was given hope...


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    Default Re: A Poem: Tick Tock

    very good! you should write haikus. They're so beautiful.

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    Default Re: A Poem: Tick Tock

    <3 Thank you. I have much to improve on, though. I'd like to get around to " rhyming " poems, but I need to expand my vocabulary, first.
    Where there is light, shadows lurk and fear reigns... yet by the blade of Knights, mankind was given hope...


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