I'm new and still don't know forum etiquette very well. Please take care of me.
I am translating 羽化 from the Turn A Gundam OST. Most of the lyrics have come together.
The problem area:
Kako wo kagayaku ai wo
shimaikonda yamiyo wa
ito wo a ga mi ni maide
Though I understand the meaning of the individual words, the many をs confuse me.
My pieces currently go like this, "The dark night that stowed away the glimmering love" "wraps my body in thread and wets my cheeks".
This leaves out 過去を and I can't figure out how to put the pieces together.
Many thanks for any views or advice. If anyone wants to see the rest of the translation I'd be happy to post it for revision before submitting.