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    Default Vie Durant - China Doll

    Some corrections for this song. By the way, it should be moved to Anime -> Vie Durant since that's where it's from. It's currently listed under Jpop -> Midorikawa Hikaru.

    line: hito mae ja tsun to shite 'ru
    correct: hito mae ja tsun to shiteru
    (I don't understand what this apostrophe is for.)

    line: kowashite toi CHAINA
    correct: kowashite to icchai na

    line: KISU no ame de nurete 'ru fuzoroi na ai no sute
    correct: KISU no ame de nureteru fuzoroi na ai no sube

    line: mate riaru wa mukidashi
    correct: MATERIARU wa mukidashi

    line: ae idarai CHAINA
    correct: aeidara icchai na


    complete correct romaji:

    sukoshi senjouteki manazashi mukete
    kimi ga chikazuite kuru
    retsujou ni hodasare jouchou wa midasare
    kimi wa miru mo muzan sa

    hito mae ja tsun to shiteru
    sore ga boku no mae de wa juujun ni semetaterarete
    FIROSOFI mo katanashi sore ga boku no maryoku

    konya mo ayatsurarechai na onedari wo surunda yo
    kowashite to icchai na kumon ni igamu Doll

    konton wo dakishime hito wa umareru
    ai de shinitai tame ni
    jouen ni kogasare joushiki wa jirasare
    kimi wo daite najirou

    dare ni mo misenai kao
    KISU no ame de nureteru fuzoroi na ai no sube
    MATERIARU wa mukidashi hizamazuite ochiro

    aeidara icchai na shigamitsuite mo dame sa
    yubisaki de furechaina kumon wa ai no Door sa

    tadoru kuchibiru kawasu aibu
    hawasu shita saki fureru junsui
    nureru kizuato hiraku junjou
    yowasu yubisaki I steal your heart

    hito mae ja tsun to shiteru
    sore ga boku no mae de wa juujun ni semetaterarete
    FIROSOFI mo katanashi sore ga boku no maryoku

    konya mo ayatsurarechai na onedari wo surunda yo
    kowashite to icchai na kumon ni igamu Doll

    /////

    Also I think the notes for who's singing when should be removed. At some point there's even a 'koyasu?' one. If we're not sure there's no need to put them in, right?

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Some people use the apostrophe for the contraction of いる just like the 's in English.

    We'll need @SakuraFox512 to respond to this first, though.

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Some people use the apostrophe for the contraction of いる just like the 's in English.
    Yep, and I'm one of the few who consistently use apostrophes for contractions =D

    Btw @magnetdance , it might just be your specific romanization style, but I'm wondering if there's a specific reason you're choosing to separate the command form icchaina into icchai na? I'm just curious, that's all.

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Hmm. I guess I'm used to separating the な for adjectives so it sort of happened automatically? ^^;;

    Ok, I have no excuses. I most likely wasn't thinking. ~chaina looks correct to me. Thanks for making me notice![IMG]file:///C:/Users/Farah/AppData/Local/Temp/moz-screenshot-2.png[/IMG][IMG]file:///C:/Users/Farah/AppData/Local/Temp/moz-screenshot-3.png[/IMG]

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Quote Originally Posted by AzureDark View Post
    Some people use the apostrophe for the contraction of いる just like the 's in English.
    And like Animeyay it's what I do as well.


    I'm in agreement with the major corrections (ex. "Kowashite to icchaina"), but I would prefer "DOA" and "DORU" be kept in place of "Door" and "Doll" respectively -- it's how they are pronounced here, and not everyone who uses these lyrics will know the "Katakana equivalent" the singers are using.

    Also, I'm in favor of keeping the singer makers in place. Though admittedly, I'm unsure as to why there was ever a [Koyasu?] marker to begin with. They alternate themselves here, too, so that verse is:

    [Midorikawa] (Tadoru kuchibiru kawasu aibu
    [Koyasu] Hawasu shita saki fureru junsui
    [Midorikawa] Nureru kizuato hiraku junjou
    [Koyasu] Yowasu yubisaki I steal your heart)

    Their voices are still distinct from each other's in this verse, even if it's not the massive difference they usually have.


    The only other thing I'd like to bring up is while we're clearing this song up, could the spacing be fixed to match the kanji as well?
    Last edited by SakuraFox512; 05-21-2011 at 09:15 AM.



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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Thanks for explaining the apostrophe thing guys. I really couldn't figure it out but it totally makes sense.

    And, and also make a Vie Durant section in the anime category for the song. This series has some great music so I plan on putting up a lot of lyrics from it!

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    @magnetdance please give the full translit complete with the rectified issues we talked in this thread since. I will colour-code the lyrics so that you don't have to be annoyed with the chara tags.

    The Vie Durant section is here.

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    And done. I wasn't that particular about the seiyuu marker thing but I can't deny that color-coding would be much neater

    I've just marked the lines they sing individually. And the one that seems like Koyasu but is actually the both of them. The rest is all in duet.


    CHINA DOLL

    vocals: Koyasu Takehito & Midorikawa Hikaru

    Shilia & Harisu image song

    [K] sukoshi senjouteki manazashi mukete
    [K] kimi ga chikazuite kuru
    [M] retsujou ni hodasare jouchou wa midasare
    [M] kimi wa miru mo muzan sa

    hito mae ja tsun to shiteru
    sore ga boku no mae de wa juujun ni semetaterarete
    FIROSOFI mo katanashi sore ga boku no maryoku

    konya mo ayatsurarechaina onedari wo surunda yo
    kowashite to icchaina kumon ni igamu DORU

    [K] konton wo dakishime hito wa umareru
    [K] ai de shinitai tame ni
    [M] jouen ni kogasare joushiki wa jirasare
    [M] kimi wo daite najirou

    dare ni mo misenai kao
    KISU no ame de nureteru fuzoroi na ai no sube
    MATERIARU wa mukidashi hizamazuite ochiro

    aeidara icchaina shigamitsuite mo dame sa
    yubisaki de furechaina kumon wa ai no DOA sa

    [M] tadoru kuchibiru kawasu aibu
    [K] hawasu shita saki fureru junsui
    [M] nureru kizuato hiraku junjou
    [BOTH] yowasu yubisaki I steal your heart

    hito mae ja tsun to shiteru
    sore ga boku no mae de wa juujun ni semetaterarete
    FIROSOFI mo katanashi sore ga boku no maryoku

    konya mo ayatsurarechai na onedari wo surunda yo
    kowashite to icchaina kumon ni igamu DORU



    KANJI:

    少し煽情的 眼差し向けて
    君が近づいてくる
    劣情にほだされ 情緒は乱され
    君は見るも 無残さ

    人前じゃツンとしてる
    それが僕の前では 従順に責めたてられて
    フィロソ\フィも形無し それが僕の魔力

    今夜も操られちゃいな おねだりをするんだよ
    壊してと言っちゃいな 苦悶に歪むDoll

    混沌を抱きしめ 人は生まれる
    愛で死にたいために
    情炎に焦がされ 常識は焦らされ
    君を抱いて詰ろう

    誰にも見せない顔
    キスの雨で濡れてる 不揃いな愛の術
    マテリアルは剥きだし 跪いて堕ちろ

    喘いだら行っちゃいな しがみついてもダメさ
    指先で触れちゃいな 苦悶は愛のDoorさ

    辿る唇 交わす愛撫
    這わす舌先 触れる純粋
    濡れる傷跡 開く純情
    酔わす指先 I steal your heart

    人前じゃツンとしてる
    それが僕の前では 従順に責めたてられて
    フィロソ\フィも形無し それが僕の魔力

    今夜も操られちゃいな おねだりをするんだよ
    壊してと言っちゃいな 苦悶に歪むDoll

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Umm... I know this'll sound stupid but did I reply to this already? I'm so sure I did...

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Ah sorry, sometimes the forum never shows new posts right for me...

    The new link is here. How do you like the color scheme? Additionally I put it as DOORU because doll is ドール and dollar is ドル >_>

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    Default Re: Vie Durant - China Doll

    Ah, just making sure. I've got terrible memory ^^;
    It looks great! Thanks for catching that Doll mistake!

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