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    Default Tokimeki Memorial 2 - Ouju no Sasayaki

    Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/game/tokimmo2/snsasayaki.htm

    I've noticed a few mistakes in the transliteration of this song, as well as some of the stanzas not correctly paragraph'd, compared to the original Japanese lyrics script. Here's the fully corrected and formatted transliteration, with all transliteration mistakes in the current one on the site bolded:


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    Mada fukai nemuri no mori de matsu
    Sakura no tsubomi kogoeteru
    Dare ni mo shiranezu sugiyuku haru wo miteru

    Mada aoi hikari no mori no naka
    Minamo ni utsuru kage hitori
    Tadayou hanabira tameiki shizumu bakari

    Yarusenai omoi dakishimete

    Tachidomaru ashioto kikoeta no
    Sakura no tsubomi miageteru
    Anata no manazashi kokoro ni haru wo tsugeru

    Tozasareta meiro no katasumi de
    Kiesou na watashi tsuredashita
    Anata no yasashisa umarekawareru yokan

    Ima anata dake wo shinjitai

    Mada kasumu keshiki ni tsutsumarete
    Furueru tsubomi furetakara
    Kokoro no tobira wa hajimete haru wo maneku

    Waraiau futari wo oikakete
    Kaze ni hanabira maiagaru
    Chiisana yorokobi furitsumoru haru no koi
    Zutto shinjiteite ii desu ka
    人の悲しみがわかる優しさと
    人の悲しみを救える勇気と
    人の悲しみに打ち勝つ力を
    『「ファイアーエムブレム:聖戦の系譜」のA-ランクエンディング』

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    Default Re: Tokimeki Memorial 2 - Ouju no Sasayaki

    Hey Azure, I replaced the entire romaji, and changed the credit to AceNoctali, since the original version was indeed way too messy and erroneous, and the transliterator was in the old "Contributed by xxx" format.

     
    (the original romaji was credited as "Contributed by Shin Hakkenden <<a href="mailto:shin_hakkenden@hotmail.com">shin_hakk enden@hotmail.com</a>>" just in case you want to reverse this change.)

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    Default Re: Tokimeki Memorial 2 - Ouju no Sasayaki

    Thanks animeyay!

    Just two last thing:

    1) The last stanza, "Zutto shinjiteite ii desu ka", should be separated from the main verse, like are "Yarusenai omoi dakishimete" and "Ima anata dake wo shinijteru"

    2) For some reason, the last line of my translation, "Is is all right with you if I believe in you forever?" disappeared after you added the new transliteration.
    Last edited by AceNoctali; 05-13-2011 at 08:49 PM.
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    人の悲しみに打ち勝つ力を
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    Default Re: Tokimeki Memorial 2 - Ouju no Sasayaki

    fix'd.
    yea, excuse my muddled mind. I'm getting pwnd hard by this song I'm currently translating. XD

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    Default Re: Tokimeki Memorial 2 - Ouju no Sasayaki

    Long time no see, Ace.

    Yeah the translit should be fully replaced.

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    Default Re: Tokimeki Memorial 2 - Ouju no Sasayaki

    Long time no see, Azu. You still remember about me, I'm really glad

    Yup, I'm back, with (a bit) stronger Japanese skills than two years before (notably thanks to a 1-year study trip in Japan in 2009), and along with having gained more confidence in my skills, I felt back the urge to translate song lyrics.

    よろしくね!
    人の悲しみがわかる優しさと
    人の悲しみを救える勇気と
    人の悲しみに打ち勝つ力を
    『「ファイアーエムブレム:聖戦の系譜」のA-ランクエンディング』

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