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    Default Re: First AMV! WATCH IT!

    My criticism

    > Music doesn't not fit anime at all :[
    > Subtitles? (Next time remove them when you make another video)
    > You over did it with the Video Overlays (Try not to use so much next time) (and by overlays I mean opacity lowering etc)
    > Video Quality is low? err never mind ;p
    > Chroma Keying is the easy way out and its looks fugly ( Always use masking, it just looks more pro)

    Other than that, It was Okay Mang. ;P

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    Default Re: First AMV! WATCH IT!

    ... At what point did you see subtitles? o_O

    And I did use masking, I used a lot of feathering though, so that's probably what made it look so blurry.

    And I thought, that I did a pretty good job at matching up the lyrics, with what was going on in the video. But to each their own, I guess. ;p
    Last edited by trunkiu; 05-09-2011 at 05:24 PM.

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    Default Re: First AMV! WATCH IT!

    Decent for a first. Most of them are really bad.

    -You didn't have subtitles so I don't know what @MangMang was going on about.
    -You really do need to lay off of the overlays. It's very distracting when there isn't something visually solid to look at. When you have 3 different scenes going on at once nearly throughout the whole video it's really hard to understand the video. An AMV tells a story along with the music.
    -I'm not very big on effects but rather more of the story telling so that's really all I can offer.


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    Default Re: First AMV! WATCH IT!

    Quote Originally Posted by blueangel06661 View Post
    Decent for a first. Most of them are really bad.

    -You didn't have subtitles so I don't know what @MangMang was going on about.
    -You really do need to lay off of the overlays. It's very distracting when there isn't something visually solid to look at. When you have 3 different scenes going on at once nearly throughout the whole video it's really hard to understand the video. An AMV tells a story along with the music.
    -I'm not very big on effects but rather more of the story telling so that's really all I can offer.
    Thanks for the advice!

    And yeah, I admit I went a little crazy with the overlapping, especially towards the end. xD
    And I agree, that telling a story through an amv, with less special effects probably does look better. But, this AMV was mostly just me messing around with the special effects on my Sony Vegas xD

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    Default Re: First AMV!

    I must have been extremely drunk or I was watching the 2 Soul Eater amvs simultaneously with this amv. My criticism remains valid though. (Besides the subtitles thing ;p).

    I'm not trying to sound harsh but I am giving out *the truth*, which is really the only way to improve, I know this because I've been through it. You can either take it to heart or ignore it. Your choice :>.

    Also even if you did match the lyrics, it is still not enough to grant this song to this anime. but each to own I guess ;p

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    Default Re: First AMV!

    Quote Originally Posted by MangMang View Post
    I must have been extremely drunk or I was watching the 2 Soul Eater amvs simultaneously with this amv. My criticism remains valid though. (Besides the subtitles thing ;p).

    I'm not trying to sound harsh but I am giving out *the truth*, which is really the only way to improve, I know this because I've been through it. You can either take it to heart or ignore it. Your choice :>.

    Also even if you did match the lyrics, it is still not enough to grant this song to this anime. but each to own I guess ;p
    Yeah, it's cool. I knew you weren't trying to be rude or anything. I was just confused withe the subtitle thing, and I disagreed with what you said about the song choice. Which in all honesty is opinionated, and really isn't worth arguing over anyways. xD

    Thanks for your advice too, btw!

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