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    Default Dignity

    Your lips leave a bitter taste.
    So sour, the lovesore.
    Trick my heart, trip my guard.
    Smashed my fist through glass.
    The only thing that got cut, is my soul.

    Your eyes leave me everlasting chills.
    No more, no more.
    Fool me once, fool me twice.
    Making up excuses for my stupidity.
    The only one who fooled me, is myself.

    Your hands leave cold shivers.
    So poor, the lovecore.
    My feelings slipped through your fingers.
    Getting rid of your belongings.
    The only thing I threw away, is my dignity.

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    Default Re: Dignity

    Splendid ! Try to rhyme it this way, if you're into rhyming, you'll make it even more brilliant. Like this :

    Your lips leave a bitter taste.
    So sour, the lovesore.
    Trick my heart, with guard thrown to waste,
    As my soft hand, had made the glass a pore.
    But only soul was cut, other pains ignore...
    Last edited by ApathyCompleX; 05-17-2011 at 06:36 AM.



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