Tonde Buurin - Koi wa Doki Doki!

[faif]

I think that this is overall strange, I wants you to correct the full text. sorry.
it's okay?
If it's possible to do, I want to correct all lyrics that I wrote...

"]http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/tondebuurin/koiwadokidoki.htm"]

koi wa doki-doki
kore kara wa doki-doki
sekki ni haniwa ni kagami mo attari shite sa

koi wa doki-doki
kore kara wa doki-doki
doguu ni magatama, sonna kibun dayo Hey-Hey

* onna no ko no HEART ngyu tto tsukamu ni wa
Bara ya CANDY nanka wa jidai okure

kawaita doki, setsunai doki
kimi no ichizu na ai de mitashite
sukisa, koneko-chan~ nya

koi wa doki-doki
kore kara wa doki-doki
iseki ni doukutsu, tsuruhashi mottesa Cha-Cha-Cha

anoko no tame naraba tsuchi kemuri ni mamire
otoko junjou, namida no chikara kobu

warete mo doki, kuttsuku doki
kenka shitatte, eien no ai
chikaou, koneko-chan~ nya

*Respect

[animeyay]

Just curious, what happened to the

Ah, Kono Bimyou na Iro. Fukai Tsuya.
nn, Hana wo Tsuku Tsuchi no Kaori ni Memai ga Shisou. . .

stanza? It was in your original submission, but not there anymore in your revision.
Was it not part of the original lyrics at all?

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Ah, Kono Bimyou na Iro. Fukai Tsuya.
nn, Hana wo Tsuku Tsuchi no Kaori ni Memai ga Shisou. . .

That is serif part in the song.
but it's not written in original lyrics...^^;

[AzureDark]

Are you writing your lyrics with Microsoft Word? Stop that and do them in Wordpad or Notepad instead...

Private Message any of the admins next time you want to correct your own submissions.

ていうかあなたはミュージカルの歌詞を整理したかった人ですかね？すまないね

[faif]

Can't write with Microsoft Word?

okay. I did copy/paste in WordPad, so I rewrote lyrics. it's okay?

あ、いえ、あの時はご迷惑をおかけしました..

[AzureDark]

ほかの歌詞の訂正があるんですか？新しいスレ立てないでここで投稿してください。

[faif]

ありがとうございました！