Is my Lily character approved?
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For the time being, Im gonna have to say no to your character. Is shes going to be an Alice, she needs to be human. Im more than ok with her being a Wonderlander being raised on Earth as a human, but that would mean you need to cut down on her powers. Even as an Alice, being able to control water -and- earth is too much. Id also like to see a bit more in terms of the history.
Few minor tweeks here and there and it should be good to go =3
Name- Jaspers Cassirer (few people know his name as he is known primarily as the “Grey Archivist”)
Age- Appears to be roughly 25 years of age
Description- About 5’6”, wears a grey suit (dress shoes, socks, pants, jacket, and dress shirt are all about the color of “banker’s grey”) with a slightly darker grey tie. He never alters his appearance, and wears his brown hair slightly parted to the right, hanging only a bit over his grey eyes. Sometimes wears glasses but often takes them off to hold them as he engages with others.
Character type- Wonderlander
Race- (Appears to be a Caucasian male human, though he is a Wonderlander)
Powers- Because of his role as the archivist/caretaker of Wonderland’s library, the Grey Archivist is very familiar with Wonderland’s past, including many of its secrets. Though he makes use of this knowledge in various ways, he has no true “powers” to speak of. In truth, his tendency to appear in seemingly secluded areas somewhat at random is due only to his knowledge of clandestine pathways and passages in Wonderland.
History/Personality- Jaspers is the quirky and eccentric archivist and caretaker of Wonderland’s library, a vast building that appears and disappears at random (again, this is an aspect of the building itself; Jaspers has no supernatural powers). He lives in the building alone, and spends his time outside of the library attempting to find books that have fallen into Wonderland from the “world of the Alices,” as he calls it. Deeply troubled by the recent events in Wonderland, the Grey Archivist is torn between interceding directly on behalf of one of the warring factions in his beloved land or simply watching the events unfold. Ultimately, he has been veering towards merely influencing both parties concerning the current conflict, though he has vowed to keep this influence minimal. His ambivalence towards both the Queen and her supporters, along with those who oppose her, has earned him little to no trust on either side of the conflict. To further complicate matters, he has been known to be a bit of a trickster when it comes to confrontations in general, often choosing to confound rather than directly oppose individuals that he finds distasteful. Though he is kind, he can be a bit edgy with his words, often displaying little patience with those he deems as greedy or, more simply put, those who show little regard for Wonderland.
Additional Information- The Grey Archivist tends to be critical of many things, even of ideals that he himself adheres to. If presented with a book from the “world of the Alices,” however, he will be putty in one’s hands, as he has been obsessed with gathering such otherworldly books since he found a book authored by a man who went by the name of Kierkegaard some years ago.
*Note: I was a bit concerned that this character might be a bit vague in terms of his role, so I ran it by MaruDashi first. Still, I am more than willing to alter whatever I need to in order to make Jaspers a good fit for this RPG. All things considered, I want him to work as a bit of a “mouthpiece” for characters in this RPG, as he will be interested in gaining information primarily and will set out to influence events only rarely in the overall scheme of things.
Last edited by Cross Avantgarde; 04-01-2011 at 10:08 PM. Reason: Hmm...did I fix an error that I made, or one the April Fool's Day filter imposed? Now that's curious...
Here is my second character a Wonderlander. I hope its all ok?
Name: Mio Mio
Description: Mio Mio appears to be a small winged, royal blue colored feline roughly nine inches from head to end of tail with light teal colored ears and wings.
Character type: Wonderland
Powers: Besides the ability to fly Mio Mio has the ability to create sugary treats out of thin air; which is commonly melon flavored candies.
History/Personality: Mio Mio was born in the Flower Gardens, but often wandered around in the surreal world of the Wonderland. It was during one of his trips that Mio Mio encountered a legendary visitor to the Wonderland, an Alice. By nature Mio Mio immediately wanted to make the Alice his new playmate. Ever since that encounter Mio Mio has been following Agatha around as her companion in the Wonderland. Overall Mio Mio is a very cheerful, optimistic and energetic being with an extreme passion for candy and melon flavor.
Additional Information: Mio Mio has an abnormal appreciation for everything melon, especially melon soda and melon bread.
I've decided to make another character. ^ ^
Name: Seraphim Rosa
Description: With silver hair Seraphim wears a deep purple jacket held closed by a silver band, with white sleeves and gold linings. His legs are covered in the back by a white cloak held in place by four straps connected to a codpiece. From the thighs down he wears purple leggings and pointed boots.
Character Type: Wonderlander
Powers: His alluring voice when used for singing can make people fall asleep.
History/Personality: Seraphim was born from the very last petal shed from the infamous White Rose of Flower Garden, it was said that he was so beautiful he could pass as a hybrid between a flower and a woman. Over the years Seraphim was the one responsible for keeping the flowers fresh and alive in Wonderland but since the reign of Queen Vilvaldi things took a terrible turn. The flowers aren't responding well to his treatments and are gradually dying but upon hearing the rumors of a war against the Queen, Seraphim left his flower families and set out to prepare for this war.
Additional Information: Seraphim is always mistaken for a woman for his beauty and feminine voice.
Last edited by Anuket; 04-03-2011 at 11:25 AM.
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Name: Amihan "Ami" Amparo
Description: Pale-blond long hair and dark eyes. She is used to wearing dresses.
Character type: Alice.
History/Personality: If left alone, she is usually calm. However, she is easily frightened and frantic about the littlest details and gets excited about nothing. She lived in a small house with her aunt until her neuroticism drove her aunt crazy and they booted her out.
Powers: She can conjure, fashion or summon various objects such as flowers, birds, vehicles, trees and jellyfish. These are greatly affected, to the point of actually being determined, by her uncontrollable emotions.
She likes making her friends happy by bringing forth their favorite things. Only that it backfires.
She was summoned because she has great potential in war, with the capability of summoning beasts, floods and large rocks to squash people. Only that it backfires.
Additional Information: The Alice who summoned her is secretly yet desperately trying to find a way to send her back.
Name: "Kite" Stryfe of Spades
Description: Dark short hair and dark eyes. He is often in soldier garments.
Character type: Wonderland.
Powers: Like many other Wonderland warriors, he can skillfully wield various weapons and has the strength to lift extremely heavy objects like the family vehicle. He tries to think through things rationally and thoroughly before making decisions. Though, this greatly underrated skill is deemed unnecessary for a soldier. He knows Aikido, Judo, Taekwondo, Karate, various forms of martial arts that his teachers told him never to violently use against anyone - so they are of no use at all, aren't they?
History/Personality: Reserved and quiet, he tends to be shy and gentle around girls because of his little sister. She calls him 'Kite' when she actually means 'Kitty', but you can't expect a two year old to say anything right. He loves reading storybooks to her at night and when his unit breaks into someone's house to kill everyone, he does his best to salvage their children's books. Stryfe also has an incurable fondness for cats and at age eight he secretly yet successfully raised one in his sock drawer. His life goal of building a world where cats and his little sister can live in peace is constantly crushed by the Wonderland warriors' communal goal of killing innocent people for no apparent reason.
Additional Information: He is also allergic to paint and is excused from Red Rose Painting duty.
OOC: I was only invited by someone. Hope this is all right? I can edit if otherwise.
Just a heads up on a name change. Decided I didn't think the name suited the character.
Name: Kain "The Wanderer"
Description: A tall figure in a black cloak, his face is hidden behind ragged black bandages. carries a knarled walking stick which has the skull of a bull attacked to it's head
Character Type: wonderland
Powers: uses his walking stick like a mace, and is unnervingly strong, humans and wonderlanders are chilled to the bone in his presence, most fleeing while others remaining rooted to the spot in fear.
History/Personality: he rarely speaks, when he does it is in a hoarse whisper. Cursed to wander for an eternity by the first Queen of Hearts for tricking her he is rumored to at one time been a member of the Queens army. He is a random force, neither on the the side of the queen or on the side of the Alices, feared by all he drifts from place to place with no apparent reason or method. He is constantly tormented from within as he tried to escape his curse and be allowed to die.
Please disregard this post, as it was placed in the wrong thread. I apologize for the clutter.
Last edited by Cross Avantgarde; 04-08-2011 at 01:09 PM.
Description- a taller man in the world of wonderland, he has blood red hair and wears a long trench coat of chameleon skin that tends to blend with his surroundings, has a bad habit of and anger, is kind of like dr.jekyll and mr.hyde
History/Personality-born out of a cats liver after it was hit by a car, was taken by queen and is now on the run, queen once turned him into a wolf. now when he gets made he becomes a wolfman.
I hate that damn RAT!
I like the character, but the queen doesnt have the power to change people. She couldve captured you, to which you escaped and are still on the run because she wants you executed for whatever reason.
Teleportation is ok, but make sure its between short distances. Across Wonderland would be more of a power and Alice would have.
Make the few minor changes and youll be good to go =3
Hope it isn't too late to join, I love stuff that puts a twist on Alice in wonderland.
Corey "Red" Jagger
Corey is a tall and skinny man. But then anyone with two eyes who caught a glance at him could say that. His skinnyness hides his well trained body. But they wouldn't tell you that. They would however go on to tell you about his weird choice in clothing. As he is often seen in the starting of a suit, with good quality pants and shoes, but then he ends it wearing just a long red scarf with a white shirt. The scarf is well made, hand crafted by him, and makes him stand out in a crowd, but it makes his outfit look ridiculous. The scarf is the origin of his nickname.
As for the rest of his features he has short cut blond hair that stays clear of his azure eyes but looks on the scruffy side. It doesn't however distract from his smile, as he is commonly seen with one regardless of the situation.
In all he is a odd ball even in the crowds at wonderland.
Skilled bladesmaster and accurate.
Corey comes from a long line of Scarfmakers. Had it been the real/Alice world then maybe this would be looked at with disinterest. But in Wonderland a Scarfmaker is something else. Yes they do make scarf of great quality but they are also hired blades and bodyguards but not assassins! Just like Hatters, Shoemakers and glovers; they are all a bit of a oddball bunch if dangerous. They are not as mad as Hatters or strict like shoemakers, but scarf makers are know for having a positive attitude to everything and anything, enjoying what life throws at them. They have also, like the others, have been supporters of Alice's that find their way into Wonderland.
For some strange reason even when fighting their scarfs never get in the way? They have adapted them into a support during fights. That in mind a well trained Scarfmaker is worth over ten card soliders any time.
Corey himself is the second Son of the current head of the Scarfmakers. Enjoying the freedom afforded by not having to worry about leading others, those instead feel to his older brother, he spent his time enjoying himself and training hard. He was a bright kid and good swordsman, that only improved with age. He is easy trusting and sharp to help those he feels deserve it.
During the quiet times he sold his talent where needed. Protecting travelling groups, guarding important individuals, or finding those who had hid themselves. He did most stuff his kind were well know for. A bit of adventurer he was away at the time that the current Queen of Hearts began her campaign against the wonderlanders. This was a blessing in disguise as most Scarfmakers went into hiding as soon as it began to protect themselves, the Queen having many of there holdings raided and destroyed. Upon hearing of the increased number of Alice's appearing the Scarfmakers began to scatter out to to search. As supporters of any Alice, Corey took up the role that all Scarfmakers have and set out to protect those he could find, in the hopes they would protect all wonderlanders. He hopes to find news about his family as he does so.
Corey keeps a store of weapons on his body at all times. Commonly there is two or three short blades hidden the weaving of the scarf, one or two throwing knives hidden on his body, and he carries at least one sword on him at all times. He is very respectful to others, especially Alice's, Hatters and others like them. He would often go out of his way to help them.
Hope it is ok that I created the whole ScarfMakers thing and made Hatters into a group rather then a person. I also think I have also taken abit of liberation with some other things as well. I worry it might bit a bit much. I was inspired after having read 'The Looking Glass Wars'. But I've got no probs changing it if need be.
Name- Hong Chi Nguyen
Description- Attractive girl with long black hair and bangs. She was born with a pigment deficiency in her eyes, therefore they are light violet, rendering her eyes sensitive. Her skin is actually darker than the picture applies. Her face is usually nonchalant but not emotionless. Slender but toned build and a fair height of 5'4".
Character type- Alice
Race- Vietnamese American
Powers- She can use hypnosis by staring into another's eyes, therefore they are obligated to do her bidding. It is only effective for about ten to twenty minutes.
History/Personality- Despite her powers of hypnosis, Chi doesn't entrance people outside of Wonderland, be it by romantic means or even social ones. She's always been kind of a loner, but her pride refuses to allow her to be timid around other. Growing up in America as a child to stern Vietnamese parents is hard enough, but her usual, light-colored eyes make many people assume that she's blind. When she was younger it was worse--to the point that she actually almost was blind. As she grew older. she came to appreciate her sight much more than the average person. This made her take up art, which has now become her passion.
Chi attends the Art Academy of San Francisco. she's befriended some people in her painting class, but never dared to get close to them. Her parents raised her to be protective of herself and not trust people outside of the family. Of course, she never trusted people either way due to some horrific experiences in her younger years, but she always tried to give people the benefit of the doubt when she first meets them... tries.
Chi's a tough woman. she took up kick-boxing a few years back simply because she wanted to protect herself. Her trainer told her she shouldn't do it if she was blind, but she told him she wasn't blind and proved it to him when she beat him in a match after a year of training. As a self-defense mechanism, Chi's taught herself to be sharp-tongued and cold when she needs to be. She's got a strong sense of pride and despises being mocked. When she goes into defensive mode, it's best to clear the area. She's got a bad temper.
One day, Chi fell into a manhole that was strangely uncovered on her way to the academy. She found herself in a swamp full of crocodiles. But these crocs were not out to eat her. Instead, they asked her if she wanted to join their synchronized swimming session. That was her first encounter with Wonderland.
Additional Information- She carries a pair of knock-off black Versache sunglasses that her mother bought for her from Chinatown for when lights gets too much for her sensitve eyes to handle. Due to this, she can usually be found in or near heavily wooded areas in Wonderland. She travels with a wolf-like Wonderlander named Hasha.
Description- Hasha comes in the form of a black and ominous but beautiful wolf. His eyes are golden and sharp. The strange thing about him is that he has two large black wings protruding from his back. He wears gauntlets on his paws and a helmet that resembles a spartan helmet, minus the red bristles.
His other form is a horrible beast, with a mouth with rows of sharp teeth. His eyes become large, blood red, and look almost psychotic. His paws tun to talons and his wings spread to threaten any enemy that comes near him.
Character type- Wonderland
Powers- He uses the shadows to spy wherever he pleases in Wonderland (All shadows are linked to one another)
History/Personality- Hasha is mysterious character as he is mischievous. He has so many secrets of Wonderland stored in his mind, but reveals hardly anything to anyone. No one knows why he wear the armor, nor why he would even want to watch people through the shadows, be he has his reasons.
He met Chi when she emerged from the swamp swimming session. Since then, they have taken a liking for one another but it's unsure if he just sticks with her because he could use her for her powers or if he actually considers her a close companion.
Additional Information- He rarely ever changes into his beast form because it tires him out to the point where he could be on the brink of death.
Last edited by ~Shobu~; 06-16-2011 at 03:04 AM.
Name - Charity Brookes
Age - 17
Gender - Female
Description - Charity is a cute "bunny girl". She has long black hair with purple tips. She also pretty purple eyes. Her fluffy tail and ears are all white.
Picture - http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/q...47eca4f048.jpg
Character type - Wonderlander
Powers - None.
History/Personality - Charity lives in a cute little house in Wonderland. She's more of a gentle creature and doesn't like fighting. Ever since the war started, she's been hiding, afraid to get hurt. She has no way to protect herself if anything happens.
Additional Information - She's afraid of thunderstorms, the dark, sharp things, and insect.
Roleplayer, gamer girl, band nerd, and ROTC cadet.
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Roleplayer, gamer girl, band nerd, and ROTC cadet.
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Last Character! I decided to make Chae mainly because Sols was wondering how it would be to interact with a male character made by me.
Name- Moon Chaemin
Description- A tired looking guy who can look charming if he smiled. Short layered brown hair, thick-rimmed glasses, and an earring in his left lobe. His body is thin but not lanky. He stands at a good 5'9". Often looks lost or dazed.
Character type- Alice
Powers- Horribly lucky; his clumsiness always seems to produce som kind of positive results (even when he never intended for anything to happen period)
History/Personality- Chae is lazy, (passively) intelligent but absent-minded, good-for-nothing college student who means well and whose parents are filthy rich. Due to this, he's been spoiled most of his life but he doesn't particularly care for it. In fact, he doesn't seem to care for anything but his video games and music.
His parents were good caretakers but they never put forth any effort to spend time with their son. instead, they just kept throwing games and various music-related gifts at him to show him that they "love" him. In return, he stays out of their hair and remains detached. Problem with this by the time he reached 18, he was bored with everything he had and he wanted something new to entertain him.
Chae became a foreign exchange student to London, England. Learning English was too simple since he had a private teacher at home who taught him so he could communicate with English-speaking gamers. Starting college at 17 was no task for him and since then he has switched majors about five times. nothing interested him not even a video game designer. For once i his life, he was afraid, afraid that he would forever be bored.
That's when he stumbled into Wonderland. The apartment that he lived in in London, paid in full by his parents, had an antique bathtub that had just been installed. The moment he decided to test it out without the water, he was plunged into Wonderland. Finally, he found something he would never tire of.
It was in Wonderland that he found the words "work" and "effort" were frequently used and acted upon.
Additional Information- Chae has never had a romantic relationship with anyone, but he's willing to try anything once but he wouldn't know a flirt if he/she kissed him smack-dab on the lips.
Last edited by ~Shobu~; 06-17-2011 at 01:44 AM.
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