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    Default Can you give me some advice on my song ? :)

    Hey guys I recorded a song and I just wanted to know what people think of it. Its an instrumental piece so no lyrics, I aimed for a calming song to just relax to. I also made an accommodating video which i think fits really well, but again i would like some feedback, so thanks in advance guys


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    Default Re: Can you give me some advice on my song ? :)

    It's nice for a relaxing piece though it's not entirely my thing. Just needed something more in the intro rather than just the drums and the piece dragged on a lot ie repeated too much. Maybe a change of rhythm or an add on of more instruments? But nonetheless, it's very calming to listen to. ^w^
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    Default Re: Can you give me some advice on my song ? :)

    Thanks alot yeah i know it repeats a bit so im trying to make a version which cuts outs bits, but after about 5 hours of recording it you just go oh that will do :P Again thanks for the criticism it really helps

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    Default Re: Can you give me some advice on my song ? :)

    Quote Originally Posted by asakura111 View Post
    Thanks alot yeah i know it repeats a bit so im trying to make a version which cuts outs bits, but after about 5 hours of recording it you just go oh that will do :P Again thanks for the criticism it really helps
    Yay~ I was helpful \^o^/ Haha, sure no problem. Keep it up ^^
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